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Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

0 posted 2002-04-30 09:32 PM

Don’t Leave Me

Don’t leave me alone in moonlight
When you go leave in another light
Tears that cascade from within me
Would reflect moonlight piteously
The last sight you have of my face
Shouldn’t be of sorrow’s damp trace
When the angels take you away
Ask them to come another day

Don’t leave me as I watch sun rise
Sun's light shouldn’t reflect teary sighs
My soul would surely call out stay
Begging you to stop with me this day
Let angels take another’s soul
I need you with me to make me whole
Don’t go away in the dawn’s light
Stay here until the stroke of midnight

Don’t leave me in the noon day sun
When our love has only just begun
If you should leave me I fear this
That I know forever sorrow’s kiss
Noon’s sun is much too bright to hide
The signs of tears and sorrow tide
I don’t wish you to see me like this
Stay awhile and taste true loves kiss

Marsha

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

[This message has been edited by Marsha (04-30-2002 09:34 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-04-30 09:38 PM

(sigh) This is sooooooo beautifully bittersweet, sweet friend, I can feel sadness in these words but I know with such a golden heart like yours you are bound to hold love close forever and he will always be there for you! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

2 posted 2002-04-30 09:48 PM

Marsha, I love this! I love it! I love it! Sad, and exquisitely beautiful, a true jewel from your marvelous and skillful pen. Darling Mushy, you write with the soul of an angel who truly feels the mixed emotions of joy and pain in such a very wonderful, passionate way.

And the construction and form are perfect. I love this poem, Marsha. Of course I always love your writing but this one is very, very good. And very special. Thank you for sharing it.

((Marsha))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

[This message has been edited by Silver Streak (04-30-2002 09:49 PM).]

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2002-04-30 10:29 PM

Another passionate lip puckering poetic
picture of powerful penning....How is that
for a few "P" so to speak?

Very nice darling girl, you continue to
grow more each write....Keep it up...

Utterly Utterly fabulous!!!!!

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

4 posted 2002-05-01 08:15 AM

Now there darling girl, ya know I'd never leave ya! Great write!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2002-05-01 04:29 PM

Every little whisper and memory of you
would keep the moments rushing
and keep away the blue.
He's singing in his dreams,
while picturing the you
remembering your words and touch
of only's coming true.

hugssss a great poem Marsha

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2002-05-01 04:42 PM

Marsha - I pray for you and yours. Hope things are well...

BC

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2002-05-01 05:03 PM

SweetMarshaLove~
You 'know' I'm right beside you in prayer~

This is tenderly penned from a heart of caring ~
Love you dear sister-of-my-heart~
*BIG HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

8 posted 2002-05-01 05:06 PM

Mushy,
Utterly, utterly a perfect poem. I felt the longing just building. I liked this write...everything about it. A keeper for sure.

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2002-05-02 05:45 AM

Very nice...James

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

10 posted 2002-05-02 12:13 PM

sis,

sweetest sis of my heart, such sadness
and longing in this poem...you know that
you're in my thoughts and that i pray
for you and yours everyday...hang in there
sweetie...brighter days are ahead.
love you much!
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

11 posted 2002-05-02 01:19 PM

Lots of light and tears in this one. I liked it.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

12 posted 2002-05-03 12:01 PM

Oh, Mushy. This is sooooo good

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

13 posted 2002-05-03 12:17 PM

So basically, just don't leave AT ALL! I wish we could have control over those facts.
This is beautiful, Marsha
Sandra

Muys
Member

since 2002-04-06

Posts 389
The Netherlands

14 posted 2002-05-03 02:09 PM

Dear Marsha
I always say
Don't leave me dear
but he smoke to much
And he is gone.
It was not fair
and now i'm here alone
knuffel
Muys

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

15 posted 2002-05-03 02:16 PM

my friend, love reading your poetry

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