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Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2002-04-30 06:50 PM


“WHEN YOU'RE NEAR”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Another time when
I was walking near
the bay, I could
see Dolphins playing
in the ocean…

Reminded me a lot
of you, and how
playful you are,
when you're near me…
~~~~


[This message has been edited by Bill Charles (04-30-2002 07:02 PM).]

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Marsha
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1 posted 2002-04-30 07:15 PM


Bill darling boy you write so well, this is exceptional writing even for a master of form such as you. I love it I absolutely love it

Absolutely excellent writing you know I love every golden word. You are an incredible writer. Fabulous writing utterly utterly fabulous


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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2 posted 2002-04-30 07:18 PM


Bill C,  you are the master of the short
and sweet and soooooo romantic....

Excellently done my friend...

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3 posted 2002-04-30 08:58 PM




(smiles) Awwwwww, this is soooooo cute and lovely, sweet friend, I love dolphins so so much, they are one of my favorite animals of all! (big hugggsssss) may you and your love forever play together in true loves happiness, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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