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Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

0 posted 2002-05-05 11:29 AM

5000th Post

I savored the bouquet of your lips
filling the goblet of my heart
dripping with grapes of passion
overflowing the brim
with a blush of sweet touch
and a hint of candlelight
cascading sweet wicks of love
melting my soul
like French pastry
upon my tongue
filled with bonbon sweet
sampling the delicacy
of a dream come true
but roving tides rushed in
and candlelight drifted
upon gypsy waves
of yesterday

"If music be the food of love, play on." (William Shakespeare)

[This message has been edited by Victoria (05-05-2002 03:16 PM).]

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2002-05-05 11:36 AM

OH Vic.....the touch you have in writing of
a moment....is simply divine.....

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2002-05-05 11:39 AM

Some of my passionate yesterdays are my best memories... nicely done and congrats on that 5000

hugsss
M

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2002-05-05 11:59 AM

overflowing the brim
with a blush of sweet touch
and a hint of candlelight
cascading sweet wicks of love
melting my soul
=========================

beautiful imagery and analogy...
clever use of metaphor.
Congrats on 5000 poetess Victoria!!!

... and I don't know why ...
Why should love come down and just sweep me away
I want to fly ... but there are so many things in my way.

J Browne

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

4 posted 2002-05-05 03:18 PM

thank you barry..always nice to here from you hugs

maureen...thank you so much hon..hugs

janet marie...thank you for peeking in..im glad you enjoyed hugss

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2002-05-05 03:52 PM

I could use some of those grapes...congratulations on 5000...James

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-05-05 03:57 PM

(smiles) Oh Victoria, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! YAY!!! Congratulations on 5000, sweet friend, WE'RE ALL SOOOOOO PROUD OF YOU, THIS IS THE PERFECT POEM TO TOP THIS MILESTONE, YOUR CONTRIBUTIONS TO THIS SITE ARE ALWAYS ENCHANTING!!! (kiss on cheek) This is fabulous, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much, may love always taste sweet like a French pastry to you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (05-05-2002 03:58 PM).]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2002-05-05 05:48 PM

VICTORIA, CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR 5000th POST!!

And a beautiful poem it is I might add!
Here's to many many thousand more!
~Hugs, Nancy~

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

8 posted 2002-05-05 05:52 PM

melting my soul
like French pastry
upon my tongue

Wonderful !! Congrats on your 5000th post Victoria !! Well done. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

9 posted 2002-05-05 06:05 PM

Victoria darling girl what an utterly absolutely beautiful piece of writing this is darling heart it’s exquisite. This is utterly utterly lovely, the perfect piece to brighten my eyes this. I love this whole poem as always it is utterly wonderful. As soft as a baby’s sigh, wonderful writing

Congratulations
5 0 0 0
well done Victoria

Absolutely superb writing, I love it utterly

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

10 posted 2002-05-05 07:10 PM

james...thank you but i think you have had
your share for a while haa...

noah..thank you for your lovely responses..
always nice hearing from you

i ate
a delicious French pastry in Manatoo Springs..and it inspired that line...

Chris..thank you Chris..i cant believe i
am at 5000...but i am..ha..thanks for peeking in hugs

marsha..thank you so much...WOW im glad you enjoyed..a lovely response from you as always..hugss

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

11 posted 2002-05-05 08:11 PM

Wow, Vic, 5000! Time flies here doesn't it?
I love this, and especially the last few lines.
Sandra

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

12 posted 2002-05-06 10:07 AM

Thank you Sandra..hugss..yes it certainly does fly doesnt it ha..

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