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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2002-04-30 11:37 AM



Shadows scream overhead
as two Canadian geese
arrive too late
for Spring Break.
Touchdown in Creamer’s Field
ends all too soon,
for the geese are quickly chased
from the end zone
by a tenaciously territorial eagle.

Wet snow still covers much ground.
Sudden warm winds bring warmth and rain,
flooding both field and street
in wet pant legs and muddy feet.
Winter laughs, scorns the spring rain,
comes back around to tease us
with fresh dump of snow, again.
But it’s only a matter of time and temperature
before winter gets tucked into memory.

Still, no sign of cheery red robin,
truest harbinger of northern latitude,
annual changer of attitude.
Vibrant green blades of grass
poke their heads up in the corral.
Proud Mother Moose with new calf
wanders through the yard,
nibbling on tender new willow shoots.
Spring lifts her sleepy head slowly
in the misty morning dew.
Rejuvenation.
Hope springs,
eternally renewed.

'Tis time to bid Lady Aurora adieu.
Soon it will be too light at night
for my rainbow of dancing lights.
The midnightsun will soon takeover the sky,
and on the longest day, the summer solstice,
This midnitesun shall fly away,
bidding this northern latitude goodbye.
Following a heart’s quest,
she heads south,
to the Rockies of the West.
But the screaming shadows of Canadian geese
will always bring a thought back home
to this part of Alaska,
no matter how far she may roam.



© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-04-30 12:16 PM


Midnitesun
This is a wonderful write. I spent over three years in Fairbanks and I've seen all that you say. It brings back memories. Best of everything in anything you do.

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2 posted 2002-04-30 12:33 PM


Sy, thank you so much. Your reply means a lot to me.
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3 posted 2002-04-30 01:24 PM


Kacy~

I have never been to Alaska, its been on a wish list for a long time....and if it is this beautiful....I may not wanna leave..... lovely words....

Lauren~

~Sinking fast into
an ocean of you,
what if I told you,
what if I said
that I love you
do we dare cross
that line between your
heart and mine~

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4 posted 2002-04-30 09:42 PM




(smiles) This is absolutely beautiful, sweet friend, I want to see Alaska so so much myself, it must be so dazzling up there, and I've always wanted to see the northern lights and the caribou and the dog sleds! (kiss on cheek) You are the true Midnight sun of inspiration to us all, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2002-04-30 11:28 PM


Lauren, Alaska is both captivatingly beautiful and incredibly terrifying at times.

Noah, one day you will visit AK. You have to come up here in winter and stay at least a month, between October and March to really see the aurora. But it is worth the effort.

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6 posted 2002-05-01 12:18 PM


'Tis time to bid Lady Aurora adieu.
Soon it will be too light at night
for my rainbow of dancing lights.
The midnightsun will soon takeover the sky,
and on the longest day, the summer solstice,
This midnitesun shall fly away,
bidding this northern latitude goodbye.
Following a heart’s quest,
she heads south,
to the Rockies of the West.
But the screaming shadows of Canadian geese
will always bring a thought back home
to this part of Alaska,
no matter how far she may roam.
===============================

We attempt to write imagery...you LIVE it!!
How cool to see your name here again and to read this picture post card...how spectacular a seasons change must be there.
It must take a lot of tenacity to live there...I think youre very brave

... and I don't know why ...
Why should love come down and just sweep me away
I want to fly ... but there are so many things in my way.

J Browne

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7 posted 2002-05-01 12:28 PM


Kacy,
You are breaking my heart here. Push on girl...follow your heart! Lovely reminisce. And lovely expectations.

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

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8 posted 2002-05-01 12:34 PM


MidniteSun, this poem is gorgeous...
I personally have always wanted2take this cruise up along the pacific coast to Alaska and upon reading your poem you've just convinced me even more that I shall indeed make that trip one day soon for sure...
Thank you Sweetie4aSplendidRead...
*~coco~*

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9 posted 2002-05-01 12:49 PM


Well now, you will just have to create your own fireworks won't you? This was a lovely tribute to the place you have called home Kacy, and the Canadian geese seem to really get around so you will indeed be reminded.  What a lovely postcard you wrote though; I enjoyed it so much.

Imagination is more important that knowledge
~* Einstein *~

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10 posted 2002-05-01 02:17 AM


A postcard...perfect description.  Have you ever seen the movie, "Leaving Normal'?  Your poem makes me want to stand there, now.
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11 posted 2002-05-01 09:53 AM


That which we have, in sight and/or mind, is always safe in our hearts ...
when time comes for our hearts to find that which is missing,
fear reigns the thought of loss over gain ...
the strength you share in this piece shows you are ready to gain.

I, too, have never ventured so far ... but have always wished it so.
Perhaps when the day comes, a quick stop at the Rockies would allow me the guidance of seeing beauty in your eyes.  
Safe travels to all!

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12 posted 2002-05-01 02:03 PM


JM, I love your reply!

Larry, thanks! You are a sweet

Coco, YES! Take that trip. thanks for your comment.

Sharon, you might get to see those 4th fireworks from your porch.

Duncan, no, never saw that flick. Maybe it's time to look for it. Hugs to you.

Craig, What a tender reply! Thank you, dear friend. :kisses:

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