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Open Poetry #20
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JamesBowie
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big old Bangor Maine up by the shack
0 posted 2002-04-30 11:19 AM

Still motion catches my eye
a key, a blade
I know not which

the falling of black stones
crosses my vision
blotted with blossoms

I spread freely
blood loosed from
their long time vessels

and a heart still full of love
and a mind with ambition
can attain powerful dreams

but never
will they occur
as my head strikes the pavement
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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2002-04-30 11:24 AM

Ouch!
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Gaia
2 posted 2002-04-30 12:02 PM

Ditto the Interloper's reply.
Almost gentle in its pain.
passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2002-05-05 04:50 AM

boy, this one makes me wanna watch my drink very closely
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