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Muys
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0 posted 2002-04-30 04:39 AM



The Mystery of Life
~~~*by Muys*~~~

Every day I think about
the mystery of life.
I see my Dad, I see my Mom,
on pictures near my bed.
My friends are falling
like the trees,
I loose them one by one.
The undertaker I know well,
I see him every time,
when I attend the funerals
of friends I mentioned in this rhyme.
I say: "Hello, I'm here again",
he says: "You should be glad",
But the only things that will be left,
are the pictures near my bed.
And then there are the memories
of two I hold so dear,
the man who loved me all his life,
the little girl I've lost.
My heart is fluttering all around
when I think of those two.
The mystery of life I guess,
will always play it's peek-a-booh.

~~~~~~***~~~~~~


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[This message has been edited by Muys (04-30-2002 05:38 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-04-30 04:55 AM


the middle word in LIFE is IF.

I like this poem, the last line set it off well

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2 posted 2002-04-30 05:22 AM


a wonderful write...one thing is for sure as we grow older the losses seem greater ...but the memories remain forever.

M

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2002-04-30 07:00 AM


Interesting...none of us know exactly how long we have...hopefully we will enjoy some special experiences and memories...James
Muys
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4 posted 2002-04-30 03:13 PM


Thank you friends for your reply.

Muys

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5 posted 2002-04-30 03:52 PM


Thanks for the thoughts you spark in my mind

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6 posted 2002-04-30 04:58 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) God Bless You, sweet friend, this touched my heart deeply reading this knowing how special you are to us all and that I know your husband and your daughter will always love you so so much and will never forget you, for you are a true angel to them! (kiss on cheek) This is sooooo beautifully written, sweet friend, my thoughts are with you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Muys, thank yuou for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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7 posted 2002-05-01 01:59 AM


ohh, yes and i do hope i am an adept player of the peek-a-boo game...i won't want LIFE to win every single time
Casanova
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8 posted 2002-05-01 02:04 AM


Muys,A Very heartfelt write, I can't say I know how you feel. I just hope Life will bring you only good, from here on. thanks for posting this. have a great day!. -Cas

[This message has been edited by Casanova (05-01-2002 02:05 AM).]

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9 posted 2002-05-01 08:53 AM


This is very good. I enjoyed reading it.
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