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It Is You
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It Is You |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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In Complete Outside of myself it is all I can see, the rearranging of reality. I refuse to accept, you cannot deny it is you that for me brings the he back to I. As the power of loving fades the tremblings of fear of my owning of life as each new day comes clear, it is you that for me brings the he back to I, as I shed old addictions and the wonderings of why. I am subtly changing releasing the dread of anxiety that brews and storms in this head. Let it rain, come the thunder let the lightning begin! The unspoken has stirred what was stored from within. I can't disappear, this me in complete. I will never say die and I'll never retreat from this trusting inside me that freedom unties. It is you that for me dries the tears from these eyes. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (04-30-2002 04:25 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
M, the strength here is beautiful! Let the storms come as they may, and run free in them! |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear nakdthoughts, how many can be/ that true loving do see, that will make all our lives feel complete?, it stems from our mind, with respect treat those kind and the one that you crave you will meet. Enjoyed the read. Sincerely Rick |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
"Shedding old addictions", ... that is you. Beware of the new drugs of the day, they may have more of a "kick". But here's a smile anyway!!  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
The unspoken has stirred what was stored from within. ============ Wow. You are getting better and better! I love it! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Maureen darling girl Oh my goodness! This is sooo amazing, the flow of this as always is perfect, the form is utterly divine as is the rhyme scheme Love this I absolutely love it. Beautifully written and wonderfully expressed, your pen always holds the magic touch Utterly utterly first class darling heart    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, A lovely poem and a delight to read. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I agree, maureen...it is YOU...claim your power!  A lovely write! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Dixie, thanks..I am doing the best I can at the moment...((thank you hugssss)) for your kind and thoughtful responses. NOw if I can just energize to run the distance! Rick, I try my best ...I still have those heart stones to paint and write about..I will get to them soon... I don't need anyone to complete the me I am, just to add to my life to make it more enjoyable...after all, we only have one life to live on earth...and I know I haven't experienced the best yet. craig, oh I hope the new addictions will be worth the taking...how can loving ever be wrong...even if temporary, the warmth you gain is worth it...You could come and "kick" me any time and I don't think I would ever regret it...smiling back at you. Interloper, sometimes what isn't said is what triggers my heart, it is the understood of the moment.and anyway, body language says alot more than words could ever *s M Marsha, thank you dear one. I hope all is well at your end. Am thinking of you always, hugs M Sy, always a treat to have you read me. *s M Karen, hi there. Things are great on this end..I hope they are the same on yours. Thank you. M |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
M, I love the spirit of you! Such a delight to see a spunky M. Wonderful write. Bravo!  It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Touching. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I can be spunky one moment Larry and the opposite the next..that is the moonchild in me pulling all the time.. *s M |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
and touching..is exactly what I was trying to do, b..you have a good understanding of me..which most don't... hugss(if I may) M |
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