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Magnus
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0 posted 2002-04-29 08:28 PM


A rock in anger is so easy to throw
when the truth is too hard to face
Simple it is to do vice letting go
and putting the stone in it’s place

Let he who is without sin cast the last
of the stones that lie before them
Let he who is without sin do it fast
before the light of day is dim

My burden of guilt and shame was heavy
as I carried those stones along
So much weight on myself I did levy
I could not carry them very long

The reminder of days gone to my past
bruises that stay and slowly fade
Of moments in my life from those stones cast
and wisdom from hurt that has stayed

I will not ever cast a stone in anger
while I live in a house of glass
I will not prejudge or condemn another
I'll forgive them, not be an a**.


[This message has been edited by Magnus (04-29-2002 08:57 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-04-29 08:47 PM


Magnus darling boy this is Utterly perfect writing, excellent phrasing in this and the lines are exquisite. As for the truth and wisdom it shines like a beacon of light, illumining and brightening the soul, and my soul in particular. Every one of us has the ability to make a choice, it is not circumstances that make us, rather it is how we choose to react to them. Like you I prefer to not act in anger, I try everything I can not to lose control of my temper, it’s not a pretty sight. And certainly not something I’m proud of, I wish I was as wise as you.

You know this is exceptionally well written, I love it utterly, I utterly utterly love it
  
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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2 posted 2002-04-29 08:53 PM


Mushy,  thanx darling girl....

Wise???  Hmmmm....  A wise man is a fool
who has finally learned something...

Believe me....I threw my share of stones,
some that I am not too happy with myself
even to this day,....BuT....I didn't
figure it for a long time,  and now I try,
and I repeat...TRY hard not to cast that
stone...  They leave such awful bruises
that don't heal for a long time...

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(big hugggsssssss) Oh Barry, this is so very powerfully bittersweet, sweet friend, anger is indeed defined as a sin, and whenever something hurts me deeply, I usually am able to control myself and crying is how I respond, for I am not a very angry person. (sigh) This is so very touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-04-29 09:24 PM


When we learn better ... we do better
wonderful write...
~~ Connie ~~

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5 posted 2002-04-29 09:32 PM


Noah...admitting to a problem requires
courage....doing something about it
requires even more....  Thank You.

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6 posted 2002-04-29 09:33 PM


Yes Connie,  I truly agree....unfortunately
it sometimes comes late in life for some...

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7 posted 2002-04-29 09:40 PM


Hello Barry

Wonderful writing and I'm sure we can all relate to this at some stage in our lives.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

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