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Love gives and takes all
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Love gives and takes all |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
After the sorrow comes the pain never in vain to heal itself Apart from me apart fron myself feeling sorry for everything When one cries is easier to feel the pain of the world And here I go again victimized by my own demise Love becomes a trap on which romantics dwell finding it hard to survive happily ever after Then it begins again is a cycle of bitter sweet torture where nothing is gain but heartache For me is too late I've crossed the line I became nothing before my time And you walked passed me when my arms where open waiting for you But you where blinded by temptation it captivated your heart and you forgot about me about our love about how much we've tried to save this to make love last I blame ny innocence I should have seen it coming Love gives and takes all |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Walker, this is so very sad, sweet friend, so many are indeed victimized by this kind of love and I only wish that love can always set up the right trap and promise forever with purity! (kiss on cheek) This is sad but powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Sorry for your pain...almost nothing harder ~~ Connie ~~ |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
For me is too late I've crossed the line I became nothing before my time And you walked passed me when my arms where open waiting for you But you where blinded by temptation it captivated your heart and you forgot about me about our love Maybe it's time to live up to your name. Some people aren't willing to learn new behavior. Great write, could feel it. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
walker, This is a powerful poem, I can feel your pain lift right off the page. I pray it eases soon. Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Casanova Junior Member
since 1999-06-21
Posts 48Mays Landing NJ |
Walker, Great poem, I could feel your pain, and so many times I feel exactly how you feel, you are not alone! -Cas [This message has been edited by Casanova (04-30-2002 12:44 AM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
It certainly seems this way...James |
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