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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-04-29 05:39 PM



Midnight's Curl

~*Marge Tindal*~

Once upon a midnight's curl
came metamorphosis of this girl
Quilted in coverlet of golden adorn
of the Cinderella-hour 'ere she was born~

Struggle of wing to be set free
To flutter the night in ecstasy
Cocooned no more in cozy wrap
Bursting free ~ Wings in flap~

Tinkling glass of unslippered feet
she made her way in swift retreat
Clock-in-strike of strokes-in-chime
away she runs cloaked in rhyme~


Boing ..... boing .... boing ~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

© Copyright 2002 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Larry C
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1 posted 2002-04-29 05:41 PM


Marge,
... ... ...boing...boing...boing
I guess it ain't about spooning!

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

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2 posted 2002-04-29 05:41 PM


Very uniqe write Marge, lovely and enjoyable read, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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Larry~
You got that right !

Floria~
Awwwww, thanks hon~
Hope you're feeling much better~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2002-04-29 06:18 PM


Marge,
You have a mind ful of fantasies and I love every one.

Titia Geertman
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5 posted 2002-04-29 06:29 PM



Ahh Marge, you caught me in the midst of my pedigreeing and it was a welcome refreshing break in this energietaken work.

It seems you always know when I need a break.

Boing Boing Boing

Thank you sweet lady

HUGS, Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I

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6 posted 2002-04-29 06:33 PM


Margie girl darling sister of my heart this is as always utterly utterly beautiful, you have such a wondrous way of writing, and so much talent. Isn't it a good thing you are also a wonderful person otherwise I might be green with envy. However you are fabulous and I'm not envious. I'm just so amazed and awed by the skill you have to produce these utterly fabulous pieces time after time.

Absolutely fabulous writing

Love and warm stuff
as always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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7 posted 2002-04-29 06:36 PM


Marge

You have so beautifully demonstrated one of the wonders of nature and life...loved it!

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8 posted 2002-04-29 06:38 PM


Marge:  This is sheer magic!  I love it!
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9 posted 2002-04-29 06:42 PM


Love the bit about tinkling glass.
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10 posted 2002-04-29 09:04 PM


Marge,I am delirious with this poem. Wow, love it.
You are magic.
Sandra

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11 posted 2002-04-29 09:19 PM


A lovely poem Marge and the image you placed with your precious poem was icing on the cake...
A treat of a read4me dearPoetFriend...
Thank you...
*~coco~*

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12 posted 2002-04-29 09:38 PM


Seymour~
Thank you sweetie~
I'd have to be the first to admit that I have no idea where it came from .. but, I'm glad it came~

Titia~
Oh ... so pleased to give you a poetic break ~
Love you dear lady~

MarshaLove~
Awwww, you've got nothing to be green over ..
You lovely poetess you !
Thanks sweets~

Martie~
Thank you for seeing ~

BettyLou~
Shucks, it just came in to sit a spell
and trolloped through my little inkwell~

BSquirrel~
THANK YOU !!!!

CatalinaMoon~
Thanks so much~
Funny thing ... driving home today, I mind-wrote 7 poems ... and as I sat down to the computer to pen them .. this one showed up, demanding to be first in line !

CoCoBaci~
Thanks, love~
I found that lovely graphic surfing the Internet a long time ago ... guess it got tired of being cooped up in my files~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~





~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (04-29-2002 09:42 PM).]

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