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ctowen
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0 posted 2002-04-29 05:17 PM


Heart hold on ...
     hold me strong
     for when I love
     I won't be wrong

Heart hold on ...
     hold at will
     cement my feet
     and keep me still

Heart hold on ...
     don't let go
     someday I'll love
     and let it show


create an addiction .... share a smile!!

© Copyright 2002 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
bsquirrel
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1 posted 2002-04-29 05:18 PM


Kinda touching. I like the thing about "cement my feet."
ctowen
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2 posted 2002-04-29 05:26 PM


Thanks for the read, BSquirrel ....
some hearts never know when to run, others do nothing but ... not sure where mine is. Somewhere inbetween I guess.

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3 posted 2002-04-29 05:35 PM




(smiles) Oh Craig, your feelings are sooooo wonderfully depicted here as always, I too feel we never want to have to be forced to run and just the thought of having our legs concreted to ones heart always is what we all wish for, yet we are always flying free in ones dreams and smiles! (big hugggssssss) This is absolutely beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-04-29 06:33 PM


CTOwen~

'someday I'll love
     and let it show'


It's the only way to go~
Neat write~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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5 posted 2002-04-29 07:36 PM


Craig~

Yes you will....hold strong, faith is blowing your way....BIG OLE BEAR HUGSSSS



Lauren~

~Sinking fast into
an ocean of you,
what if I told you,
what if I said
that I love you
do we dare cross
that line between your
heart and mine~

nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2002-04-30 05:16 AM


In between is not too bad...it at least is in a holding pattern

hugs
M

Larry C
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7 posted 2002-04-30 11:06 AM


Craig,
Good write...holding on is a good thing.

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

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Deep in the heart
8 posted 2002-04-30 11:07 AM


Well done, indeed.
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9 posted 2002-04-30 11:54 AM


I will hold onto this one. It's so beautifully written.
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10 posted 2002-04-30 09:26 PM


Seriously understood, my friend.
Sandra

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