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Silver Streak
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0 posted 2002-04-29 04:44 PM


One sweet loaf of bread - inspired by Marsha's poem, "Two souls in one"

"How beautiful you are and how pleasing, O love, with your delights!"
NIV Song of Solomon 7:6

I awaken in morning, a new day O so bright
Sunshine flowing through my window in pretty glow
And there you are beside me an angel in white
Glowing radiant beauty, breathing very slow.

Body, so beautiful as you lie next to me
Eyes beaming bright a loving sight you are so pure
I love you so your beauty glows, so tenderly
Two spirits dine; sweet lovers shine in God's allure.

And yet I know you're far away across the sea
This glow so fair comes through the air in blowing wind
Our heart's reside inside a chosen frequency
Two souls, one spirit, fly together with no end.

I close my eyes; I feel your sweet lips kissing me
I touch your face as we embrace in loving touch
Our hearts beat strong although I'm gone away from thee
All heaven glows as each star knows of our love, such.

Bright loving power as our starlight, lightens heaven
Two souls in one sweet loaf of bread, raising leaven.

Two souls, one spirit making one sweet loaf of bread.

One sweet loaf of bread for God.

Copyright: Newell Elsworth Usher
Silver Streak of Springs, Florida
April 29, 2002

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1 posted 2002-04-29 05:25 PM


Enjoyed.
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2 posted 2002-04-29 05:27 PM


Newell darling boy as always your writing portrays such depth and by far outstrips the scribble that inspired you to write this utter beauty. This is absolutely a magnificent piece from you, the power of the words and the metaphors are exquisite. Truly outstanding writing. You excel at this type of character picture painting, truly excellent writing

Utterly utterly superb darling heart well done

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


strbbux
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3 posted 2002-04-29 05:43 PM


And what a loaf of bread that must be Newell. Great poem, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Silver Streak
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4 posted 2002-04-29 06:22 PM


Thank you bsquirrel.

((bsquirrel))
-newell

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Silver Streak
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5 posted 2002-04-29 06:24 PM


Thank you Marsha, darling heart.

((marsha))
-newell

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Silver Streak
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6 posted 2002-04-29 06:26 PM


Thank you, floria. Yes, Marsha inspires me to bake a lot, LOL...

((floria))
-newll

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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