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Two Souls Together
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Two Souls Together |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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~Two Souls Together~ Wherever I hear you say come here I feel you physically draw near There’s no distance between you and I You are as close as my heartfelt sigh Your heart is here inside of me I hold it in trust of love’s certainty No days will end in my teary pain I’m with you now and I will be again Your touch is imprinted in my soul The part of you that makes me whole I hold you in that deep place in me That is a perfect sanctuary Whenever I feel your eyes on me I feel the heat flow hot and free I’ll breathe the spicy scent of you And taste a love that is ever true You are always here inside my heart There’s not a second we’re apart Two souls in one place and in one time I have your heart and you have mine Marsha To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
And you can give it back right now ... By the by, can you do anything about this gaping hole in my chest?  ~*~ This is a wonderful and loving piece. Well done, Mushy. Well done, indeed! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mushy, You are an excellent writer. Your rhyme and flow is as good as any I've seen. There is no muddle in your pink bubble. Everything reads clear and to the point. And I name you my official bubble blower. LOve it.  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
beautiful, warm and loving, as only you know how to do Marsha hugs M |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Very sweet. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Marsha, darling girl. Sweet dreamer of my heart. Your pen again writes beautiful poetry. Two souls in one as you know is one of my favorite themes and you fuse them very beautifully in wonds rhyme a wonderful imagery. And as I read your beautiful words, the wind blows glowing warm breezes through my window and I too must write. For you inspire me, Mushy, like no other poet could ever do. ((Marsha)) -newell And so, One sweet loaf of bread - inspired by Marsha's poem, "Two souls in one" "How beautiful you are and how pleasing, O love, with your delights!" NIV Song of Solomon 7:6 I awaken in morning, a new day O so bright Sunshine flowing through my window in pretty glow And there you are beside me an angel in white Glowing radiant beauty, breathing very slow. Body, so beautiful as you lie next to me Eyes beaming bright a loving sight you are so pure I love you so, your beauty glows, so tenderly Two spirits dine, sweet lovers shine in God's allure. And yet I know you're far away across the sea This glow so fair comes through the air in blowing wind Our heart's reside, inside, a chosen frequency Two souls, one spirit, fly together with no end. I close my eyes; I feel your sweet lips kissing me I touch your face as we embrace in loving touch Our hearts beat strong although I'm gone away from thee All heaven glows as each star knows of our love, such. Bright loving power as our starlight, lightens heaven Two souls in one sweet loaf of bread, raising leaven. Two souls, one spirit making one sweet loaf of bread. One sweet loaf of bread for God. Copyright: Newell Elsworth Usher Silver Streak of Springs, Florida April 29, 2002 Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (04-29-2002 04:42 PM).] |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Marsha dear this is simply beautiful. No wonder Newell was inspired to write his poem , lovely write, floria Floria |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetMarshaLove~ 'a perfect sanctuary' Says it all for me~  *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Marsha - you have written a winner. Great write... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Marsha, this is beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always make me smile just as I know they will always touch your loves heart! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Mushy....I won't say anything about this poem....Seymour said it perfectly.... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marsha What a beautiful love poem!!! |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
beautiful...... ~~ Connie ~~ |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Marsha "I'll breathe the spicy scent of you" I loved that line!! I'm a sucker for going to the department store and smelling mens aftershave......I just love that spicy pine smell!!! Simply gorgeous!! I loved your wonderful words. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Sunlight in a glass sweet Marsha. Very nice. ThisDiamond |
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