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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
I was awakened from a dream late last nite to the sound of the clock tick-tock tick-tock and in my mind for just a moment of passing time I embraced a vision of you and I with open arms sharing the yearning to be held once more just like we did in times before... With many secrets deep inside never revealed to either of us for fear the other just doesn't care to simply surrender and hold no blame so instead we slowly drift apart living our life we just pretend... Yet, how can I deny the truth that if I should meet someone new it would never be a love as true for in my heart I will know I would still be loving only you...  *~coco~* [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (04-29-2002 01:49 PM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Coco, Awww...that is one sweet write indeed.  It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Coco, sweet poetfriend, how I hope this is just a passing thought. I want to know that you will find your "true" love and experience unbounded joy and love |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes when we part from someone we really care for it seems strange when we first become involved with someone new...as if we don't belong...but time takes control...James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
hello dear PoetFriend Coco. . .  this is truly wonderful. . . yes, there will always be that one, won't there?? I've often wondered why. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Hi Coco, I think I said these exact words to someone last week.. hugs M |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Who doesn't know these feelings? Well done. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Coco - a very beautiful write, got me thinking... BC |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Larry, Interloper, James, Sven, NakdThoughts, Squirrel & BillCharles... I thank you sweet PoetFriends from the bottom of my heart for your responses2this poem2day just made me smile... In some strange way there is always that one love that will remain, a love that is always pure, no matter where you go, whatever you do, whomever you're with, there is always that special one in your heart who you will truly love... BearHugs2uDearPoetFriends *~coco~* |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, and may that special one forever make you the happiest person you can be and love you forever! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CoCoBaci~ You pegged it square on the head ... and interestingly enough ... the special affection for that 'one love' doesn't detract from loving again with a wonderful new intensity~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Coco What Marge said is so true, but isn't it nice that such a special love remains the same through time, in heart. Beautiful poem! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Mistletoe, you're a darling sweetPoetFriend and I thank you kindly4your reply2my poem... Marge & Martie, my dearSweetFriends, I read carefully your reply2me and a part of me believes this true yet ya know there's that part that just doesn't seem2let go... Oh well, life goes on as they say and one thing is4certain it is indeed wonderful2spread your wings in gentle breeze and discover new beginnings... My heart hugz u3PoetFriends... *~coco~* |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh Coco how beautiful is this. True love runs deep and never subsides completely, it rests quietly in our hearts carved out in a place all it's own. Love your poetry. |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
I believed that...and then I met someone... |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Blues & AmuseMi, thank you so very much4your comments in reply here are most appreciated... hugs2uBoth... *~coco~* |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Yes, there is only that one. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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See me? Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 93UK |
Beautiful, i no how you feel,great write God Bless Clare Life is about change,sometimes its painful,sometimes its beautiful,sometimes its both. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
MR... thank you bearry much4letting me know you have stopped by and taken a peak at this lil poem I write... Seeme... now there's an interesting name nice2meet you PoetFriend and I thank you for your sweet reply2me...HugsNsmiles2u2PoetFriends... *~coco~* |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Coco, Wow! This was wonderful! Not only the emotions expressed but the manner in which they were expressed! This piece spoke to me on a very personal level. Thanks alot. David2 |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
hey there David2, nice2meet ya PoetFriend and my heart hugz ya 4the sweet comments you've shared with me sure do bring out many smiles... Hugs2uPoetFriend... *~coco~* |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Ya know, I'd swear ya been looking inside my head again, Excellent! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
hi there Eagle1, thank you bearry much4taking a peak at this poem... Do ya ever get in2 a mode where you just can't seem2shake a thought well that was one of those dayz4me and soooo I thought what better remedy than 2come here2my sweet friends and try2put it down on paper/screen whatever it was that was streaming thru my headspace that day... Hugs2UdearFriend *~coco~* |
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