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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-04-29 12:38 PM

The Unthinkable Place

My words only hint
along lines that may rhyme,
grasping the inner
of strength that I find
in the freedom I need,
that unthinkable place.
I am crossing the realm that
allows me to face
those unthinkable thoughts
that have driven me so,
as I walk through the myst
and the essence of know.

It's the bindings untied
that I cast off each day
that allow me my freedom
in penning this way.
There's a power that's greater
that draws me to you,
that allows me the pleasure,
receivings come due.
My words only hint
of that which inspires
the you, that to me,
lets me free my desires.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Opeth
Senior Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 1543
The Ravines

1 posted 2002-04-29 02:11 PM

Excellent ryhme and rhythm. But the subject matter is even better. I had to read this a couple of times in order to understand the meaning. Makes me think...so why is the place unthinkable to you?

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

2 posted 2002-04-29 02:16 PM

M,
You just keep getting better. And I like the you it reveals! Excellent write friend, just excellent.

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2002-04-29 02:37 PM

You know how much I love the positive work you share with us.
Please do not stop ... or even slow down

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2002-04-29 02:43 PM

Opeth,
The unthinkable place is that which is unknown to me...the moving forward I must do, leaving my well-known world to make me free to live a new life...something I am working on *s

thanks for your thoughts

M

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

5 posted 2002-04-29 10:07 PM

Hello Maureen

I really liked this and I guess we all expose parts of our inner soul through our writing - I know I certainly do. There are still so many people that don't know I write and I feel more comfortable in not telling them (does that make sense?)

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-04-29 10:12 PM

(smiles) I agree, sweet friend, your writing continues to grow so wonderfully and it is always a joy to read the wonderful words you spell up! (big hugggsssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

7 posted 2002-04-29 10:20 PM

So much talent in your beautiful words.
ThisDiamond

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2002-04-30 03:54 AM

great one again!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2002-04-30 07:17 AM

Larry are you sure you aren't Sy in disguise, you are stealing his lines *s

hugs and thanks
M

Interloper
you are deep in my heart sometimes..I think you make me want to write happy just so you say these nice things to me *s
M

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