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vandana
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0 posted 2002-04-29 12:09 PM


I will hold on (tonight)
Tonight
Is a day
To shine my dreams away
Hold on (tonight)
Don't wanna to cry anymore,
Don't wanna to let
My pain come again,
Let the sun come,
To my life,
I have been holding
On to dreams
The dreams I have had,
I have seen so many things
In my life,
So don't want to lose a thing
I have seen so many things
In my life
So don't want to lose a thing
That have been dreaming
Hold on (tonight)
Let my tears wash away
Because I have been holding on
(to long)
Everything
Everything right(tonight)
I will make everything
right
(Tonight)
Hold on (tonight)

[This message has been edited by vandana (04-29-2002 12:14 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-04-29 12:53 PM


WOOOOHOOOOO 3000 Way to go Vandana~

C O N G R A T S!!

Lauren~

~Sinking fast into
an ocean of you,
what if I told you,
what if I said
that I love you
do we dare cross
that line between your
heart and mine~

Sunshine
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2 posted 2002-04-29 12:54 PM



I was watching, Vandana, and I knew your 3000th post would be very, very special, and it is!  Congratulations!  I hope things are going much better for you...

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2002-04-29 01:28 PM


VanDana~
Enjoyed~

Congratulations ... I remember your very first post here~
You have grown so in your writing~
Lovely dear~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

Larry C
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4 posted 2002-04-29 01:55 PM


Vandana,
Excellent write and a fine way to celebrate 3,000 posts!
Wooohooo!!!

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

Sven
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5 posted 2002-04-29 03:10 PM


wonderful my friend. . . just wonderful. . . I've enjoyed your work ever since I came here. . . it beats with your heart, which makes it wonderful. . .

congratulations. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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6 posted 2002-04-29 03:15 PM


Congratulations on #3000 and your best to date, I believe
nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2002-04-29 03:35 PM


Let the sun come,
To my life,

I hope it does everyday for you
hugs
M


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8 posted 2002-04-29 04:54 PM




YAY!!! OH VANDANA, WE ARE ALL SOOOOOO PROUD OF YOU, I LOVE THIS!!! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) CONGRATULATIONS ON 3000, SWEET FRIEND, THIS IS THE PERFECT POEM TO TOP IT ALL UP!!! (smiles) Your words always delight all our days, sweet friend, God Bless You, your wonderful words grow each day, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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9 posted 2002-04-29 05:17 PM


What a beautiful way to mark your milestone. *S* This is lovely, vandana... Congratulations!
Marsha
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10 posted 2002-04-29 05:22 PM


Vandana darling girl, as always you write with such skill and beauty I found this excellent poem wonderful. Exquisite writing, the flow and the rhyme are utterly utterly spectacular This poem contains some amazingly beautiful lines, the form is utterly utterly divine, and I love it I truly do.

Congratulations
3, 0 0 0 well done


Utterly utterly utterly perfect

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy




To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

[This message has been edited by Marsha (04-29-2002 05:23 PM).]

JamesMichael
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11 posted 2002-04-30 07:03 AM


Very nice vandana...congratulations on 3000 writes...James
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