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Perpetual Memory...(not quite Paladins chall.)
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Perpetual Memory...(not quite Paladins chall.) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Perpetual Memory When my memory fails will you sing to me the songs in my heart that lie silently And whisper with kisses of our walks in the rain when splashing in moments of loving again Will you whisper your tender with afternoon eyes and love me 'til evening 'til the dark carries sighs And the days become nights within arms to be laced when my memory fails will you capture it's place? In the shadows of moonlight when thoughts disappear caressing with lips will you kiss away fear In the candlelight touches holding moments with me Will you share in my journey making new "memory" When my memory fails into eyes of mine, stare all the moments of you shall be mirrored in there. M this was something I wrote when thinking about aging...and love...I haven't thought about death yet or afterdeath remembering.. "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wynter~ 'Will you whisper your tender with afternoon eyes and love me 'til evening 'til the dark carries sighs' GREAT BIG AFTERNOON SIGHS wrapped up in this read~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
M, Incredible write...again. Well done.  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Magnificent! [This message has been edited by Interloper (04-29-2002 03:09 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thanks Marge, I wrote this about 2 years ago, thinking about those who are elderly ( more so than I) and what they want from life..that shows in their eyes if not through their voices.. hugs M |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Afternoon eyes. Beautiful. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, this is such a powerful vision of growing love that is bound to last forever! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Maureen~ I so enjoyed the feelings this evoked. It does make one think about the loss of memories when our memory can no longer remember them. I don't even want to think about it but this was such a lovely poem. Take your sweet time on writing about death or life after......there's no rush!! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Larry and Interloper, thank you both..I wrote this a while ago..sometimes I think my passions were deeper then and my writing more intense *s bsquirrel..yes back then I had afternoon eyes..don't know what happened to them since then..*s thank you, M Noah...sweet and kind always.. thank you for your thoughts M Lori..I don't like to think about it either and don't even recall why it was written, maybe it was another challenge *s Thanks ( sorry I wasn't up last night on here..pooped out early..this bouncing weather gets me down sometimes *s)Maybe tonight hugss M [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (04-30-2002 07:24 AM).] |
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