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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Watching Today I watch for butterflies On my back with face to the sky Drift with the drifting puffs of white And watch for bursts of words to light. See mist on mist imprint its list And watch for those that will insist Study colors and different hues That brings my thoughts to different views. Those play upon my whimsy mind The frizzy and the dizzy kind Control the beating of my heart What pain and loving thoughts impart. I luxury in quiet rhyme And watch the sand depart my time I warm within the suns embrace For such is the will of my pace. I cannot zap the lap of tide. Nor cap its fall on life’s abide. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
enjoyed it sy, another grand shapshot |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger Thank you for the read and comment this morning. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Today I watch for butterflies On my back with face to the sky Drift with the drifting puffs of white And watch for bursts of words to light. See mist on mist imprint its list And watch for those that will insist Study colors and different hues That brings my thoughts to different views. Those play upon my whimsy mind The frizzy and the dizzy kind Control the beating of my heart What pain and loving thoughts impart. =================================== Your wish is my *winkie* command *L* I could never deny you anything *S*      ... and I don't know why ... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I found one more....   |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, You are the hillium of my ID's balloon. And the cover of a worlds cocoon. Please wake me up when it's spring And we will have a butterfly fling Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky.   |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Vandana, Thank you. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling boy, what utter utter joy is this butterfly delight. As always your pen writes me into rainbow dreams where unicorns play with little cherubs and crystal streams of water tumble over rocks spreading diamond drops of light. Truly exquisite writing darling boy, when are you going to write for the fire maidens among us mmm? Okay there really is only one fire maiden when do I get a Seymour treasure. Pretty please……. You do know I love this don’t you   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dear Mushy, I think tomorrows poem will be interesting. In the mean while thank you my pink bubble for the wonders of your write. Sy |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling boy thank you, I can barely sit still with excitement. You can almost see me can’t you? Mmmm, I know, x x x thank you darling boy you’ll see my biggest pink bubble smile  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sy, this is GR8! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mushy, Thank you for the extra reply. Interloper, Thank you for the GR8. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) This is soooooo beautifully touching, sweet friend, may all the caterpillar inspirations bloom from your hearts cocoon and morph into butterfly thoughts just waiting to be netted gently with joy! (smiles) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sy, I don't know about butterflies but I can assure you if you're laying outside on your back in your neighborhood, men with nets will be on the way to help you!  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The sky is the place to see all that we look forward to...with bells on! Really nice write. ThisDiamond |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
LMAO....I do love 'deer's comment.... And I like this poem....such is the ways as we gracefully get a little older... I like the last two lines best...a good "cap" to the ending... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Enjoyed your reply. Balladeer, Now why would they want to do that? This Diamond, Thank you for the nice comment. Magnus, Thank you for the read and reply |
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