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kumjme god song
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kumjme god song |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I hurry step down into the night foot place under edge of the land of porjch behind the two tree garden I hear the othermajn god howling there from dark closet forests you appear you are pale skin tormenting I know your moan voice from morning sounds when you have chanted your kumjme words you give me eye buttons to wear on my hands I bring you my whisper balm for your wound we make you sing heal sigh songs you make shudderfly wings on the wall shadows in your mind you tell stories of drum teeth that bit your young woman then and you show me rhythm of your hunger sore my thumbs open your taboo mouth wide you scream crazy woman love to the kumjme god ©Dark |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Strong...very strong.... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Morning ms Sunshine, thank you for your review...I enjoy the brush of your eyes |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) This is soooooo wonderfully passionate, sweet friend, I just love all the wonderful inventiveness you bring in your voice! (big hugggsssss) May you always hu love songs to ease all the wounds of before, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger Not quite up to all your symbols yet but got enough to understand. Enjoyed |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Good morning, DS "we make you sing heal sigh songs you make shudderfly wings on the wall shadows" Allusive and alluring, your words. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Noah, thank you my friend, a pleasure to have your look see. Sy, just a place out there in the thoughts where good things happen in a naughty way perhaps..thanks for the eyes man Ms Martie, thank you sweet lady...glad you enjoyed I appreciate your touch |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
DAMN!! Me~ ~Sinking fast into |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Lauren wink and thanks for the damns |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
you scream crazy woman love to the kumjme god This is my kind of language..very magnetic to the touch places. Oh how you write.. there. Sincerely, Reg |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I swear you speak in tongues DS~ Had to read this more than once to see if I missed anything good. And sure enough I found what I was looking for! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Reg scream up babe...always enjoy the sound of you reading me, thank you. Bluez, can almost feel your eyes on the words and see you shaking your head...thank you sweet lady for your reads |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
I am sitting here screaming in delight at your made up words. But then the meanings are not so very difficult to understand. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
janette...grin, well ya gotta do what cha gotta do..just a little world of my own I guess thanks babe |
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