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SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2002-04-28 11:08 PM

As I sit here thinking about the days gone by
I remember all the love we shared so long ago
Right next to each other we use to always ly
As our love for each other we continued to show

We would sit underneath a tree looking at the sky
Looking at all of the flowers as they started to grow
All the things you use to say they were always nice
Now it seems as if your heart is starting to get cold

I wonder if you will ever love me like you did then
There is no doubt in my mind my love for you is true
Just like it was on that first day when our life did begin
Each time we were together our love for each other grew

I wait each day for you to come back to me
To give me the love you gave that was so sweet

By Sue 4-27-02

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-04-28 11:18 PM

(smiles) Oh Sue, this is wonderful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always make me smile! (kiss on cheek) This is such a breathtaking sonnet, sweet friend, I wish this love to always come true for you and sing to your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Casanova
Junior Member

since 1999-06-21

Posts 48
Mays Landing NJ

2 posted 2002-04-28 11:23 PM

I enjoyed this, A very good read. And it flows very nicely. And Don't every give up on love, it is worth waiting for.

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

3 posted 2002-04-29 12:31 PM

Sue,
A nice write and love is a wonderful thing for sure.

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2002-04-29 12:37 PM

Wish upon a star.
If love be true,
it may return
from afar.

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

5 posted 2002-04-29 11:54 AM

sue,

beautiful write, from your heart..
thank you so much for sharing...true
love is always worth waiting for. please
just hold on.

take care.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2002-04-29 11:59 AM

enjoy your read

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2002-04-29 01:12 PM

I enjoyed your words, I no longer wait for a return..it could never be the same.

*s
M

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2002-04-29 01:23 PM

SweetSuzieQ~
You've written this bittersweet ache in such a lovely manner~
Wishing you all the best that love can bring~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

9 posted 2002-04-29 02:50 PM

An achingly good sonnet

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

10 posted 2002-04-29 04:04 PM

Sue - you bring back a lot of memories with this...

BC

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

11 posted 2002-04-29 05:31 PM

Beautiful and sad.

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