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Unrelenting Love
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Unrelenting Love |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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I call thee, do not go away I plead my case, please whilst thou stay? Abide with me in passions heat Take me and sweep me from my feet. This bitter pill thou gavest me no longer swallows easily. Just one last time, I call thee so and then twill be my pain to go. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Oh Sandra, I wish you this kind of love to come true for you forever ever so much, sweet friend, this is a wonderfully heartfelt poem with a classic glow! (kiss on cheek) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
As lovely as your are, Sandra, I don't know why he waits? ((Sandra)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sandra, you're singing my song. I always relate to your words. This is very well said, if achingly so~ Take care and hugs, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sandra, A haunting write, enjoyed. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
The pain thy feel oh lady most fair Shall go as does the set of moon A breeze shall swirl thy lovely hair as thee await, to feel 'gain soon. Thy knight doth ride into the set of moon behind the hill on high To share the heat of passion yet To bring forth from lips softest sigh. Thy pain twill go.... Excellent poem Sandra.. |
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Casanova Junior Member
since 1999-06-21
Posts 48Mays Landing NJ |
I call thee, do not go away I plead my case, please whilst thou stay? Abide with me in passions heat Take me and sweep me from my feet. Great Job, I loved it! [This message has been edited by Casanova (04-28-2002 10:54 PM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sandra, Yup, read it twice. I liked it twice! Well done. It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice expression of the pain and it looks like it is finally breaking away...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! You read my mind here! of course I could have never thought of it so gracefully as you have written it |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Sandra, you show great passion here, with the old time feel and the words hope. Again inspired. I leave you not my love of true My life would end if not for you The passion that we both do share Will follow me to everywhere The pill you take is of my will The words you read fresh off my quill The time we share of caring way Together now and everyday Sincerely Rick Much enjoyed. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Barry and Rick, you have the best poetry within a reply. It is a treat to read them. Thanks everyone who reads my poems, it helps to write, and even more when someone comments. S |
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