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Moonight Apparition
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Moonight Apparition |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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Moonlight Apparition From clouds of silver teardrops, Tendrils of past stream down Sense it in a heart-stop- As we walk the barren ground… Within a moonlight apparition , Silent echoes of the mind Explain away the superstition- Yet still feel the chill behind… With the faintest sagacity of sunshine, Silent wisps of the departed fade Veil it for another time- As we meander on our way… Yet, they seem to strike a covenant, Between most worlds and mine For I’m living with the dead Trapped holding the sign… Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) This is sooooo powerfully haunting, sweet friend, your words are always so striking and bring great illusion and depth to the thoughts of the reader! (sigh) Another wonderful keeper, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tanya, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
devina, I so do miss the way you write. Always a pleasure to read. I think I might have to read this a few times to get its full meaning.... my mind is not as sharp as it use to be...lol. Parker |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
 As the adult tries to sooth, the child behind your eyes saying, "There are no ghosts" What do you see before you? And what makes you feel so trapped? If you can see, you have a gift. These that only reflect the moonlight and fade at dawn.... they are only waiting to move on. Lovely poem sweetie. Love, Light and Peace Sherry Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ah yes. . . I like this one dear. . . it's got that quality that makes me think. . . I enjoy when you write like this. . . well done. . .  --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Spooky-cool! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Ok, so I'm dumb ... but I gotta ask. What sign? |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Noah-Your compliments always make my day m'friend...ty James- Always the gem you are...'tis simple really- 'Cept I don't want to KILL the old "I see dead people" line.. ROFL Sherry- Too right you are, I know...yet powerfully haunting just the same me thinks...ty m'friend John- Have to keep you on your toes!!!  Mike- ty much Interloper- The sign to me, signifies the portal..it's as if I'm stuck on stupid sometimes...holding the damn door open....spooky stuff it is!!! and you stupid...NEVER... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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BrandeeM Junior Member
since 2002-05-01
Posts 45 |
I love the whole rhythym of this!!! Spooky stuff indeed!!! *waiting for more*...I've missed you!!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sneaky snake gots the wiggle feet moves gets to your mind back when you take the dreams for walks devina, dug it... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
devina, you are very good at this... no bout a doubt it! |
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