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Madame Chipmunk
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0 posted 2002-04-28 07:25 PM


Vision Of Imperfection




Each morning she greets me
a vision of imperfection
that face in the mirror
a stranger's reflection

a silver haired princess
with eyes so dark
I don't quite recoginize her
and yet...there's a spark

something vaguely familiar
in that sleepy grin
I've seen her before
where could that have been?

it suddenly dawns
as I gaze up and down
I know who she is
neath that silver grey crown

I suddenly realize
as I'm jolted with fear
I know just who she is
its become all too clear

the years have passed quickly
her hair has turned grey
but she's the same kid
I was yesterday




Lyra

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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-04-28 07:32 PM




(BIG HUGGGSSSSSSS) Oh Lyra, I can feel such sadness in these words, I know just how you feel, bu know no matter what happens, you will always be that child deep inside of you and you only continue to growe with love everyday, for you are a true angel with a golden compassionate heart! (wipes tears) We are always here for you whenever you need someone to talk to, sweet friend, God Bless your loving heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lyra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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Madame Chipmunk
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2 posted 2002-04-28 07:39 PM


Thanks Noah...but it really wasn't meant to be sad...I was just joking around.
The chemo turned my hair completely grey, but at least I still have hair...just a bit thinner than before, but its getting thicker every day.
I actually find the grey quite amusing right now, but eventually I'll dye it back to its original color...
~loads of hugs

Lyra

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3 posted 2002-04-28 07:39 PM


Oh Lyra, I do love this. And I know that feeling. I keep wondering how I could have changed so much, when I feel the same as ever.
Hugs
Sandra

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I like this Kid.  A LOT!

Madame Chipmunk
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5 posted 2002-04-28 07:42 PM


Thanks so much Sandra...
The chemo turned my hair completely grey...but I guess thats better than making it fall out.
BTW, do you know how I can change the color of my words?
I originally had another picture with it, but it wouldn't post, and the words match the other picture...
~getting old hugggsss~

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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6 posted 2002-04-28 07:43 PM


Thanks so much Karilea...Please see my answer to Sandra...above...
Is there any way to change the color of my words?
~lots of greyhaired hugs~

Lyra

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7 posted 2002-04-28 07:47 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Awwwwwww, I understand how you feel, sweet friend, I have missed you so so much lately and reading your gorgeous words! (smiles) I guess sometimes I tend to get a little too sensitive over poems, so I'm sorry if I sounded a little overemotional! (kiss on cheek) Ooohhhhhhh...it's just so great to have you back!



Love,
Noah Eaton

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8 posted 2002-04-28 07:55 PM


Lyra, welcome back. I have missed your words so much. I always find what you write brings a smile to my face. Even in times of sickness and hardship, this poem made me smile. You have a wonderful attitude and I am sure it has helped you so much. Be well and bless you.  Hugs, Marti

" My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother."

Madame Chipmunk
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9 posted 2002-04-28 07:55 PM


I'm glad to be back, Noah...but its probably only temporary....
On Monday, we start running back and forth to Ann Arbor again...
and the radiation treatments have been so horribly exhausting, which is what has kept me away from my computer.
I only have 1 week left of the radiation, but they say it takes a couple of weeks to recover from it...so I'll be back whenever I can.
Its really great to be appreciated and missed
Thanks a bunch   ~hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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10 posted 2002-04-28 07:57 PM


Thanks so much, Marti...
Please read my answer to Noah (above)  I will try to be here whenever possible...but for the next couple of weeks, it will be difficult...
~lots of hugs

Lyra

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11 posted 2002-04-28 08:04 PM


Lyra,
I'm just betting that I would love your grey! And btw, if your low on energy these days I vote you leave it grey and keep your energy for PiPs! My little battle is nothing compared to your experience I know...but I do bear so much concern for your health. While you fight your battle we will patiently pray and wait for your return, dear friend.

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

Martie
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12 posted 2002-04-28 08:27 PM


Lyra

Your lovely shines through your words, and I just know that sparkle...it makes me smile!  Hugs!

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13 posted 2002-04-28 08:45 PM


It's her; it's her
with lots of spunk
With whitened fur
Our Madame Chipmunk.

Your golden words are still painted like honey. Keep 'em coming.

((Lyra))
-newell

  

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14 posted 2002-04-28 09:06 PM


Lyra,
The poem is exceptional and I did miss you.
I wish you well and hope for the best. Bless you. Sy

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15 posted 2002-04-28 09:17 PM


never mind the grey hair, besides it's more becoming they say ..neat poem!


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16 posted 2002-04-28 09:23 PM


Well,  at least you don't have the problem
I have....Mine won't ever grow back...
Gray?  What is gray?  Maybe if I died my skin
gray....

Loved this Lyra...and I too see that same
kid in the mirror at times....

Hang in there girl,  you are doing great!!

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17 posted 2002-04-28 10:40 PM


Hey, at least you got the "princess" right! That you will always be, dear lady
SmartChick
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18 posted 2002-04-28 10:56 PM


Hey there Lyra! Glad to see you back. I like this alot.
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19 posted 2002-04-28 10:57 PM


Life does pass fast, to that I agree. But I think Life only gets better every day...
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20 posted 2002-04-28 11:00 PM


It is not so much what we look like but how we see ourselves, and God forbid we ever change!!  You are beautiful both inside and out, and your poetry just adds to your highlights.  

Warm huggers~

Madame Chipmunk
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21 posted 2002-04-28 11:18 PM


Thank you so much, Larry...not only for your reply but also for your concern.  You are right...for the present time, I'm leaving it grey...but it did get a bit thinner and I'm seeing the new hairs come in now and they are looking darker...so I think the grey ones are just stronger.  I have lots and lots of hair, so even though I lost some of it, most people who don't know what it looked like before, never even know that I lost any of it....of course, I could end up having some more chemo or some other treatment that would take ALL of it out, but for now at least I have hair...and grey hair is better than no hair and so.........I LOVE my grey hair because it is growing on my head.  I still have a week of radiation therapy left, so I may not be back again for a while after tonight...but I was feeling well enough to come here today, so I did.
~warm hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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22 posted 2002-04-28 11:19 PM


Thanks so much, Martie...its good to be back here, even if only for one evening.  When my radiation is finished, and I recover from it, I'll be here more often...
~many hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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23 posted 2002-04-28 11:21 PM


Thanks so much for your reply, Newell...
I may be sidetracked again this week...but will be back when radiation treatments are done and I recover from them....
~hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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24 posted 2002-04-28 11:23 PM


Thanks so much, Sy... I have missed being here so very much, but have had trouble even keeping my eyes open lately.
The radiation treatments seem to take everything out of me, and I still have another week to go...but I really wanted to come back here tonight because I felt okay...
I know this is temporary...but I will be back again when I finish being radiated....
Thanks for missing me.
~many hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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25 posted 2002-04-28 11:25 PM


Thanks so much, Martin...at least its hair...LOL
Actually the grey doesn't really bother me, but as soon as I am allowed to, I am going to dye it back to its original color because I like it better...but until then, I can live with the grey...of course grey hair is better than no hair!
~loads of hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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26 posted 2002-04-28 11:32 PM


Thanks so much, Barry...Please don't dye your skin grey
I think men look much better when their skin isn't that dirty color.
~lots of hugggsss

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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27 posted 2002-04-28 11:35 PM


Thanks Michael...
hmmmm....at least I got the princess right...
That implies that I must have gotten everything else wrong
Thanks for thinking I am a princess...
I AM the princess of quite a lot...thats the name of one of those new nations which was carved out of the former Soviet Union...
It was called Quitalot
~many many hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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28 posted 2002-04-28 11:38 PM


Thanks so much, Sue...I'm back for tonight...theres no telling what the rest of the week will bring.  I have one more week of radiation left and then some recovery time...and then I will be able to spend more time here...but I felt okay enough tonight to sit at my computer, so I decided to visit my friends here.
~many sweet hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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29 posted 2002-04-28 11:39 PM


Thanks so much for your reply, Casanova...
I wish you were right about life getting better every day...but at least you're an optimist...
Welcome to Passions
~hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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30 posted 2002-04-28 11:41 PM


Oh Lori...what a sweet thing to say...
That makes me feel so very good!

I think I will highlight my grey hair with poetry, what do you think of that?
~many sweet hugggssss

Lyra

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