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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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Eaten Alive The devastation of isolation, the confusion and sad anger still resonates in the silence of a scream indicative of childhood torn of its dream I don't know where or how the fate paints across the canvas of eyes in wait because you molded, warped and twisted every fibre of breath and heart forcing tiptoe of battered feet through the minefield of your rage on the eggshells of tears devastated by years and answers that never come There's no will to survive, I eat myself alive through bones and flesh of soul in a dread enmeshed memory of not so long ago By Melissa P. Monette [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (04-28-2002 04:24 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Melissa, this is soooooo heartbreaking, you are never alone, for I feel just this way, where I just want to cremate my past-self and desquamate my skin and strive to reincarnate my entire self and find dreams I could never have yet! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSSSS) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, I know with all my heart soon everything will look up for you and you will find all the love your heart desires, for I wish this happiness so much to come true for you! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, you are in my thoughts, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Melissa, Your writing weather sad or fair is always a delight to read. Sy |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
These words are flowing like the lava from a volcanoe Melissa...James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
your words flow from that place that few would look into, but that you look at straight on. . . well done. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Melissa, this is fantastic and writing is a wonderful way to heal. Powerful poem. floria Floria |
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