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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2002-04-28 12:02 PM



Distant Need

What are left when words are done
and can't express the need of life
when prayers have come and gone each day
yet news still pains, like stab of knife.
The heart is pounding out for you
and you for he and he for time
and all I have to offer is this poem
with my words of rhyme.

To comfort, soothe you in distress
to ease your mind, unload the pain
when time is of the essence now
I am here on this blue plane,
that closes distance, far and wide
connecting friendships, everlast.
You have emerged into my life
to always leave a glowing cast.

On sharing moments, we sometimes feed.
Todays your time of distance need.
*
Although for someone special...I share
Hugsss and prayers for all and any who have loved ones needing healing.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2002 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
mutington
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since 2000-11-29
Posts 132
New Jersey, USA
1 posted 2002-04-28 12:18 PM


This is a power line of verse....

"..The heart is pounding out for you
and you for he and he for time.."

Truly an excellent poem!!!!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


mutington/joyce

"I can live by myself, but not within myself."
MUTINGTON'S  MEADOWS



KimW
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 268
Medford, Oregon, USA
2 posted 2002-04-28 12:52 PM


"The heart is pounding out for you
and you for he and he for time
and all I have to offer is this poem
with my words of rhyme."

I am speechless. (Beauty and power are combined and flow eloquently)


Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625
FL, USA
3 posted 2002-04-28 02:12 PM


Very pretty, Maureen.

((Maureen))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
4 posted 2002-04-28 02:24 PM


M,

as always powerfully stated...your
words are very much needed im sure by
all today...thanks so much for posting
this...such beautiful words you have
penned.
take care.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2002-04-28 02:57 PM


Maureen,
This is a wonderful write, thank you for posting.

Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2002-04-28 04:18 PM




(big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, there is on every special friend I have been thinking of everyday lately who posts his work here at Passions that I am praying for that is one of the best friends I've ever had and I wish for true healing and joy to fill his heart in this time of great need! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, you are a true angel as I know so many others here think, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
7 posted 2002-04-28 06:05 PM


nakdthoughts - I could use some of that healing right now...

BC

RSEvans
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since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA
8 posted 2002-04-28 06:13 PM


Your friend is a lucky person indeed, as are we all to have a friend like you.  Thank you M
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
9 posted 2002-04-29 06:18 AM


Thank you all...I just felt the need to express these feelings. I am pleased you enjoyed my words.

M

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