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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2002-04-28 11:43 AM


Hey You!

Ow! Ow! Ow!
You’re blinding me
You great big ball of gas!
But I gotta tell ya,
I love it, I love it, I love it!

You crystal up
the dew drops,
you sparkle up the lawn.
You brighten up the hours
and lighten up the dawn.

You call flora and fauna
to a state of readiness
in glory and honor
they beam an eye caress.

It’s as if the world of nature
has nothing more to do
than stand at rapt attention
and pay honor just to you.

And I will praise your Creator
for loveliness that abounds
the way the day unfolds
and the happiness I’ve found.

©April 28, 2002

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

© Copyright 2002 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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Member Empyrean
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
1 posted 2002-04-28 04:44 PM


"It’s as if the world of nature
has nothing more to do
than stand at rapt attention
and pay honor just to you."




(smiles) This is the most perfect Sunday blessing poem, sweet friend, may we all be blessed by the many gifts He offers us and honor all that Mother Nature gives and respect her! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Virginia, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
2 posted 2002-04-28 04:58 PM


Wow! This just pops! Very well done. ThisDiamond
Larry C
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since 2001-09-10
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United States
3 posted 2002-04-29 12:12 PM


Virginia,
I thought you lived in Oregon?! Forgive me...I know better. And this is indeed a poem that bursts on the page. I just couldn't keep my smart mouth shut.


It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

[This message has been edited by Larry C (04-29-2002 02:18 AM).]

Magicmystery
Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821
Windsor, Ontario, Canada
4 posted 2002-04-29 02:44 AM


A poem of delight or a poem of THE light... either way it is a deLIGHT to read such a wonderful poem.  My sol is elated!!!

Love, LIGHT, and Peace,

Sherry Gardner

Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow.
But above all... be kind to yourself today.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
5 posted 2002-04-30 01:45 AM


There is a lot to be thankful for if we just take the time to look around us.

Most delightful this was.  Very!!!

Magnus
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South Carolina, USA
6 posted 2002-04-30 07:59 PM


Imagine how bleak our world would be if we
did not have that bright light waking us
each day...and showing us all the beauty
that abounds around us...

Nicely done Virginia...

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