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Power of a Woman
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Power of a Woman |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Power of a Woman (Inspired by Paladin) Don’t take a woman’s mind for naught Don’t take heart in jest To her demands give serious thought For she decieves the best She’ll treat your soul like royalty Emracing your desires You’ll float along in revalry No heed to what she sires Beware all sailors of the ark Don’t treat her with neglect For every time that you embark Is cause to circumspect She beckons with desirous eye To delve into her soul And you so readily comply In glory she extols Caressing you with gentlness In warming ocean streams Rocking you ‘neath starry bliss Fullfilling seaman’s dreams Slapping waves upon your bow Ripping at your side Until the fear of death has eaten Soul and heart and pride She shrouds you in a bliding mist Entrapping who you are And all you visioned to exist Remains on shores afar Each vessel daring woman’s power That sails from off Cape Cod Be mindful that beneath the flower There lies the hand of God Elizabeth Santos |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, You are overflowing with wonderful poetry. The visit did you good. Stay well. Love Sy |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lady Santos! Thank you for this wonderful smile from you! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Bravo, Liz! This is excellent  Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, yes, and the heart of a woman is a true flower that God will always hold dearly in His hand and water with love and innocence always! (kiss on cheek) Your words are always such a delight to read, sweet friend, you are a true poetess of grace, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes how many women have told me that they want me to like them for their mind and their personality...and not their body...listen up sailors...for this is the power of a woman...James |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you for your comments. You know, a poem can be read in any context that fits your heart. And this must be very ambiguous. I was simply writing about the sea, in one big metaphor, but I guess you could apply it to women also. Watch out for those dangerous flowers, you sailor guys! We'll wrap you in mist! Hey, not a bad thought Liz |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is just beautiful, Elizabeth. I enjoyed reading this. |
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