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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Elizabeth It was a strange mist that drifted through That moment I laid eyes on you. We met before in sweet adore And ever since have had rapport With memories posted on your brow I read all those you would allow With hardships of the distance sphere A fear came very close to near. When in the misty glistening heard? The chirping of an early bird The crunch of sunlight eating gray With entrance of the light of day And time melted from my goal And light, lit my inner soul A silent tear formed in my head Your eyes that welcomed me instead Forgive me friend the time between It’s something that I should have seen. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
May I pick, then, a new favorite poem one that sees me safely home? A time of rhyme that heeds the need of all I want, and all I read... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, You are the first, lovely gesture.   |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling boy and keeper of dreams, YOU know I’d love this. As I believe I’ve mentioned once or twice before YOU can really write, this is utterly outstanding. Your use of form and line simply cannot be bettered, you paint with words darling heart almost as well as you paint with love. The strokes of your pen sketch in the outline, then with your masterly use of words you bring the picture to life. Utterly utterly exquisite writing xxxxxx Make my eyes shine and my body so Pliant and ready to welcome you Feel the touch of this coming through Paint me poet, add colour to my face Let my breath exhale my pulse race Daub me with you artistic skill Paint me poet show me your will Sketch me poet write my eye’s sight Draw me into the shade of night Paint the sound of laughter’s voice Learn to touch the soul of choice Draw me poet, draw the line of me Paint me waiting for opportunity Sketch me poet my form and line Daub me in attitudes of sweet sublime Love and warm stuff As always Mushy   To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, "Crunch of sunlight eating gray" Delightfully your phrases play In spectrum's field of bright display Upon my waking of the day No words could match your gentle pen That plucks the thoughts of where and when That hang from morning glory's vine And twists them in a verse that's mine Thank you, dear friend Your Poetry is the best Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mushy, There is no doubt you are a delight and my Randy is blowing smoke and pawing the ground. But Tinkerbell has me bound. You are my Alice in wonderland. My Cheshire that winks within my open soul. My everyday muse and goal. So we can play in phantoms land and strike up a tune that's grand. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, You are a love a velvet glove And coo the coos of a dove. Your rhyming is beyond compare You know I really don't compare. It was a blessing to see you again and I am so glad you are doing well Keep in touch if you can and let me know what is happening. Love Sy |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
It was a strange mist that drifted through That moment I laid eyes on you. We met before in sweet adore And ever since have had rapport With memories posted on your brow I read all those you would allow With hardships of the distance sphere A fear came very close to near. ============================= A silent tear formed in my head Your eyes that welcomed me instead Forgive me friend the time between It's something that I should have seen. ============================== Sy this is so endearing and sweet...what a lovely gifting of heart rhymes...the hand held out of friendship in this made me smile and touch the warm as I read your tender words ... and those beautiful closing couplets made me want to give you a big hug for your sincerety and gentle spirit...We all have been touched by your and dear Liz's friendship...and this gentlemans tribute to her is another gift of that connection. Lizzie, love your reply verse as well.  Thank you for making me Tinkerbell heartsmile this morn me sweet Stinkylove. Youre the best Sy-babes. love you  mothyme ... and I don't know why ... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy "Forgive me friend the time between It’s something that I should have seen." You touch a place of tender here, so dear! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Whatever shall we do with you, you write sweet phrase that sticks like glue. Commemorate a love of eye to words she pens in rich supply. Enjoyed, Seymour! and thanks for dropping in on my "Ya Old Crow"  Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, You have touched me with honey sweet And placed wings on my running feet. To dissipate the heat of cause I owe you at least applause. Winkiewinkie Randdy Stinky. Martie, Thank you love. VAS, I do follow your poetry and enjoyed your clever comment. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sy, you bring the beauty that is Liz Santos to life so wonderfully! I'm so glad that you are a poet, you truly do have a tender heart Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sweet Melissa, |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Your wonderful words always beacon with such heartfelt gems of friendship and love, sweet friend, I know Elizabeth will always be blessed by this dedication and every morning when she hears the birds warble she will remember always the memories you shared with her and with some other wonderful Passions poets here! (big hugggsssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Always love to read your comments. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
And time melted from my goal And light, lit my inner soul A silent tear formed in my head Your eyes that welcomed me instead Oh what a beautiful tribute, Sy...  ~huggsss~Lyra |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Seymour - excellent write. Liked this very much, very much indeed... BC |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lyra, So nice to see your comment. I hope all is well with you. Bill, Thank you for the very very. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Sy, this is beautiful, as is the object of the poem. I'm so glad Liz inspired such a lovely poem from you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Poet deVine, She is a lovely women that I greatly admire. Thank you for the read. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I remember watching as your friendship developed here on these blue pages... how wonderful it must have been to meet at last! *S* This is beautiful, Seymour... doing justice to a remarkable lady. *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suthern, Thank you sweet, |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sy, "beautiful" just doesn't seem to cover it my friend. . . but, it will do for now. . . well done. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sven, You are my friend and I thank you. |
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