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Needed Reign
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Needed Reign |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Needed Reign Was it only yesterday when those words crossed your lips reaching out burning their message onto mine? When you looked at me through shaded glass could you see the torturing behind? I had ~craving~ written across my face my body writhed in rhyme. I grew to love you more each day, infinity my time. I struggled with my want of you, each movement yours to take. I longed for you to mold my feel to secret my escape, to offer me the label of the one you could procure. I am just me, whose joy is you in dreams and nothing more. I am the Lady oft with Knight, whose darkness powers sword, whose eyes within the end of days is destined my reward. You lay upon me come each eve, the art of you devine. Was it only yesterday I came upon your find, absorbing all that lingers past and through my dreams' rewind? Will it be tomorrows touch that will chamber me to you again turning my voicing into silent need? When you view the Alice in me, will you shed the shades and come to this side and with your lips then feed? I have ~loving~ rising, desirous of you my eyes to yours concede, I've grown to love you more each day, I flower from your seed. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (04-28-2002 04:59 AM).] |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
This is so beautiful ....... I think i am gonna read it a few more times!  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Verve, James, thank you both for taking the time to respond. I appreciate you *s M |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Maureen darling girl OH MY This is simply stunning writing, utterly utterly stunning. How beautiful the words in this are, the flow is as smooth as silk, the phrasing perfect, and the timing is absolutely spot on Excellent writing you know I utterly utterly love it Do I love this yes you know I do    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
"I flower from your seed.' Perfection...floria Floria |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"I have ~loving~ rising, desirous of you my eyes to yours concede, I've grown to love you more each day, I flower from your seed."  (smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, and may you always reign as queen in his heart and forever be treated with sincere and pure love! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Marsha..and your kind, uplifting responses always make me look forward to them hugss M..hope your day is going well Floria, thank you for your sweet response *s M Noah, I will reign as long as I have breath in me...not so sure where but I know I will somewhere. hugs and thanks M |
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