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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States 
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I studied you from head to toe, As you laid napping on the floor. If I planted them side by side, And end to end for some more. I could get, if you didn’t move, 528 kisses on the front half And if you rolled over I could Get 500 kisses more on the back half. So if you multiplied those kisses, Times the affection and then, Squared that times my love, You know what you’d have then? A fraction of my feelings that I Keep inside for sharing later… April 27, 2002 It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Larry, what a calculating piece this is and it shows that when you write loves adds up and equals perfection.  Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
This is a charming write, full of love and affection, put a smile on my face |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Larry darling boy this is wonderful. This is a very special piece from you darling boy, incredible writing full of such love and tenderness. I love it, It’s wonderful to see you work darling heart absolutely wonderful. I love it utterly utterly love it  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy   To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This could be the most touching poem dedicated to a man's dog I have ever seen..  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo cute, sweet friend, your wonderful words always delight my day and have the child in all our hearts shine! (big hugggsssss) This is going to involve a lot of that algebra you studied in school, LOL, we all love you so much, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Larry, I always hated math... But, I love this. Great write! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I had an answer or reply until I read the Balladeer's...and ROTFLMAO, now I lost my train of thought. Roll me over, in the clover, roll me over......? You tickle my tummy. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Larry~ LOL I had a reply as well until I saw Balladeers cute little doggie....where does he get those wonderful toys.... This is full of love and devotion.....another heart write you have here.... Lauren~ ~Sinking fast into an ocean of you, what if I told you, what if I said that I love you do we dare cross that line between your heart and mine~ [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (04-28-2002 09:47 AM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Larry - now that is a lotta, lotta, lotta, lotta kisses... BC |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Hahahahahha so glad I am here this morning for this MILLION DOLLAR poem.. it is wonderful...floria Floria |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I love how you do the math. Just don't ever subract! Infinite numbers to you my poet friend.. Sincerely, Reg |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now this is math I understand... |
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KimW Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 268Medford, Oregon, USA |
**Smiling** Love writes beautifully from your pen. (Replies make me giggle & I also like that!) |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kethry, I'm glad you checked the math. I'm too out of it to know! LOL And thank you. Martin, Thank you and I'm glad to have put a smile on your face... Mushy, Thank you dear friend, thank you. Balladeer, ROTFLMBO including my sweet forgiving wife!  Noah, I didn't get passed arithmetic. Algebra was before my time! It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Nancy Lee, We sure agree on a lot of things. LOL Thanks.Kacy, LOL You always manage to crack me up. Thanks always. Lauren, He gets them on poet journeys to New England to see sweet ladies! And thank you for your kind words. Bill, It is not...! Those are warmups. Thanks.floria, Are kisses a highly infalted commodity? LOL I doubt it but had to ask. Thanks. It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Reg, I think we took the same class. I would never subtract! Thanks.Karilea, I think it is the only math I care to bank on! LOL Thanks. Kim, Thanks for your kindness it does indeed add up! It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
the title pulled me in and the ending made me smile...now, make good on that promise, will you? |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
faterider, I'll do my best! It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Sweet. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
looks like you'll be another that brings consistent smiles Larry. Glad i started reading you. Chris (ps, sounds like fun, does she have a sister?)  |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
bsquirrel, Thanks. Christopher, LOL Not anymore...but you missed out on some awesome nieces. Too bad. And thanks tons. It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I love how you do your math! It's all relevant isn't it? I'll bet you passed with flying colors!! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lori, Depended on who was grading papers! It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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