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D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2002-04-27 04:02 PM


The winds of time fly backwards in memories of regrets
Mirrors of distortion crack under inspection
Rippling currents of moody introspection
The truth to some will lie in quicksand foundations

As less pain is developed to live in the past
The reality of survival buries its head
Straight tunnels of side vision
Create walls of doubt about purpose

Scrambled egg words yokes at you
In air conditioned heat of stagnation
Sending slimy slippery food of ingestion
Slowly winding down the throat of time
Upchucking in gurgling champagne

The eagle flies in open skies of panoramic views
The masterpieces of time float in the mind
In the visions that cradles smiles
Gentle breezy fingers
Massage the inner lining of your flight

So as time moves does it appear the same for all
Does the universe rotate in unison
Is what I see the same that recorded time will come back to
Is time ticking the same in all of space
Or are their black holes of ghostly deception

Tick
Tock
An alarm clock waits
In a space
The universe expands
Into what
How can it expand
Into nothing
So as my words confuse
Do they delight
Most of all do they remember
In what
I hear them repeat
In what
In the hope of osmosis
Of your time taking over mine
What
Is the ending


Email me at davelyoung1@hotmail.com
D.Lester Young (03/12/02)
Tuscaloosa, AL
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1 posted 2002-04-27 06:47 PM




(sigh) Oh my gosh, this is a very powerful and good question, sweet friend, I too feel that somehow we are all connected together throughout the world and one action one of us makes is consequential to all of the balance of life somehow, even when it is a black hole of mystery! (big hugggssssss) This is very thought-provoking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-04-27 08:24 PM


The eagle flies in open skies of panoramic views
The masterpieces of time float in the mind
In the visions that cradles smiles
Gentle breezy fingers
Massage the inner lining of your flight


...may take a few readings but I liked this the best..the upchucking has a real meaning to me that I won't go into..*s

thanks
M

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