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Diamond Destiny |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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In wish of song to once be sung the beauty of a diamond flung In want of soft and tender touch Of more than this, of more than much In search of lips to lightly kiss and feel the fire of moment’s bliss To touch the face of beauty trace to hold and hug with more than grace In need of sound of quieting voice to hear in hope and right of choice In yearn of fires that fuel bright eyes to feel the soft and gentle sighs To hold and hope and take to dream a choice of this in walk of stream A love once found and treasure kept into arms strong of eyes that wept I kiss your lips as slumber 'rives and bring to soul the passion drives Lie your head 'pon warm bed of me and dream of this, one's destiny [This message has been edited by Magnus (04-27-2002 10:53 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, Smooth as silk. Enjoyed |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sy...thanx...always appreciate your reply.. Mag. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I know with such a giving heart like yours that you wil seek this destiny and fall into this heavenly dream in reality with the one you love! (big hugggsssss) This is a wonderful vision of paradise, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy may the stars catch you up in a net of wonder and the moons glow light your dreams, I really love this poem it is UTTERLY utterly fabulous This is excellent and as always I love it. Is that a subtle nuance of affection I hear? The softly falling rain that covers my soul with Magnus scented peace and delight? I think so I really think so. TRULY PERFECTION I love this darling heart, it’s utterly utterly fabulous. Does writing get any better than this? Well, if it does, YOU will have written it    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
WOW Magnus you are writing so so well. "In wish of song to once be sung the beauty of a diamond flung In want of soft and tender touch Of more than this, of more than much" such wonderful words, great to be back reading your work. floria Floria |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wow, this is outstandingly beautiful, Barry. I so enjoy your poems. Sandra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I kiss your lips as slumber 'rives and bring to soul the passion drives Lie your head 'pon warm bed of me and dream of this, one's destiny ----------------------------------------- Did you just hear that Barry?? That was the biggest sigh you've every heard, just come out of Canada.... and it came from little ol me!  I LOVE THIS POEM!! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A sparkling account of a beautiful and eloquent man. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
TD....thank you...such a comment on such a common man... Nancy....Yo Nancy.... Can you hear me? Probably deaf from the last sigh that was heard here in the southeast.....Reported that an earthquake occured somewhere in Eastern Canada... Thanx Lady....Geeee..I didn't know it was that good.... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Barry - I've read many of your poems, and this is another great one. And thanks for your support... BC |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A Keeper.... |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I knew this was a keeper from the title - which I LOVE! Barry, this is your best, bar none!  Here's yet another sigh from Canada~Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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