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Mirage
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Mirage |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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sand and miles to walk waves of stone finesse sand and lips of chalk taste the bone's duress sand and legs of balk waste of gravity's caress sand as visions talk haste to taste, the oasis... |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
Wow... Sooo Coooollll!!!! I think this poem is wonderful.... as much for it's words as it's shapes.... and you did them both so perfectly!!! Awesome!!! Love, Light and Peace, Sherry Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wow serenity, powerful omages but you and doreen could do a duet for the emptyness of it all. Kethry. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
BRAVO!!! dear seren, this is fantastic, wonderfully done, well penned ~HUGS~  Tracie |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
excellent....up to the last word.  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hey you! good stuff here...in the last few days as ol sol has been heating up the plains, I have watched the air wave at me...so the word mirage has been kicking around in my mind, but you beat me! Good for you!  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Wow, I love this, sweet friend, I could envision me crawling on the desert sands reading this, for we have been having the worst drought in half a century here! (big hugggssssss) You always describe emotions and visions so wonderfully, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks all, and hey Kari? I don't own the mirage business--so I'd love to take a look at yours, mine ain't lookin' so good these days!!!  Much gratitude from me to all of you! |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Gentle smile..you only get better.. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wow, most cool. I like this. Sandra |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Loved your format here sis...reminds me of the Arizona heat...ack!! Can also read you on a deeper level of oasis dearie!! Shall I fetch the agua???Hugs special one!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Serenity, this is terrific. great work. floria Floria |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Great writing as always, this is so cool! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Serenity darling girl this is wonderful. This is a very special piece from you darling girl, incredible writing full or images that spring forth. I love it, It’s wonderful to see you work darling gitl absolutely wonderful. I love it utterly utterly love it  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy   To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
waves of stone finesse sun sand and lips of chalk taste the bone's duress ================================= I'm here...*sigh* ...the weekends bite! you do know how cool this is dont you? you better cuz this rocks...love the rhyme scheme here...and the abstract imagery... you wrote arid angst baby...and made it waay cool ... and I don't know why ... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and Jan? And to all? "Thank you," somehow doesn't seem enough. But I can't afford to write you all checks, so I am hoping that this will do! Yer dollz. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
You find sensuality in the desert -- I tell y', yr one of a kind. And a very good kind that be. |
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