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Marsha
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0 posted 2002-04-26 09:26 PM


Bewitched By You

My eyes are bewitched once again
While my ears hear your sweet refrain
I can feel the melody holding me
Dancing me into a trance of ecstasy
I’m bespelled by the wonder of this
Held by the need of your heated kiss
No escape from this tale of delight
I’m tossed in dreams soft moonlight

My lips are parted in expectancy
Waiting for that jolt of electricity
I want to stay and offer my touch
On the altar of needing this so much
Don’t make me pant or gasp a cry
Just softly let your fingers fly
Over my lips in softened caress
Hear me sigh that single yes

My face is flushed with pink’s plea
As I murmur darling come to me
I know the heat that seems to rise
Is echoed in my ragged sighs
Just how much clearer can I be
My body language talks softly
Take from me this burning flame
We’ll dance in heat once again

Marsha

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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Magnus
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1 posted 2002-04-26 09:33 PM


I have no clue who gets all of these
poems written to them....BUT I DO KNOW
desire and passion when I read it....

Your flames are flaring
Your words are daring
The cauldron is boiling
and Mushy is calling..

Way to go Darling Girl...another one of
your "Barn Burners" that is utterly and
simply fantastic!

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2 posted 2002-04-26 09:35 PM



Something tells me we are feeling a little better this evening...how good this is to see...how much better it is to feel!

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-04-26 09:44 PM




(smiles) This is such a beautifully delightfully sensual poem, sweet friend, may you always embrace your love with a smile and dance to eternitys heartbeat forever! (kiss on cheek) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Balladeer
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4 posted 2002-04-26 10:56 PM




tracie66
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5 posted 2002-04-27 04:44 AM


Oh dearest MM~
This is just devine, so romantic and passionate, well done on a superb write
~HUGS~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



JamesMichael
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6 posted 2002-04-27 05:18 AM


Wowee...like this Marsha...lots of potential for action and satisfaction...James
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7 posted 2002-04-27 11:23 AM


marsha,

hi ya my sweet sis...such passion you have
written here, i think my screen is fogging
up! You have such a way of writing
that really takes the person into it...
such vivid imagery that leaves a person
breathless, or maybe thats just cuz we
both are passionate people hehe

as always my dearest sis, you have a way
with words like no one else i know...such
beauty flows from your pen whether its hot
passion like this or some of your
lovely love poems... all are beautiful
and wonderful to me...as always i stand in
awe of your gift and talent.


I love you!
Amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

RSEvans
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8 posted 2002-04-27 11:25 AM


WOW!  Passion for the muse.  Nicely done
Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2002-04-27 11:35 AM


Marsha,
Just go back and glance at Balladeers post again.

strbbux
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10 posted 2002-04-27 05:59 PM


Marsha you are writing just as great as ever but I cant stop laughing at baladeers pic, hahaha Wow this is so great, I love it Marsha, hey I have a friend just moved into a large mansion in Cornwall. anywhere near there? floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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