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At the Heart of the Rain
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At the Heart of the Rain |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
In between these seasons of color Lie dreams upon which I’ve fallen In the comprehension of your smile. Beautiful is the azure countenance That awaits me upon beds of blossoming affection; Endless is the song that was introduced At the heart of the rain in fields of influence. Atop the cloud that holds my thoughts Wanders the golden reverie that shines Far beyond any unsettling indications. Breathtaking is the crimson burn That lights my way back to your embrace; Enchanting are the eyes that have been presented By the unruffled night in moonlit breezes. Over the course of times that contain our memories Strides a continuous determination that perceives The moments to record our delicate infinities. Affecting are the words You speak to me upon beds of blossoming affection; Endless is the song that was introduced At the heart of the rain in fields of influence. -kh '02 I've been down this road forever, |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  YAY!!! Oh my gosh, I have missed your wonderful poems so so much, this is soooooo beautiful! (kiss on cheek) May your memories forever glimmer with sunshine and ay the garden of your heart always be kissed by the rain of love! (sigh) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Beautiful! Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
"Over the course of times that contain our memories Strides a continuous determination that perceives The moments to record our delicate infinities." Oh my......gorgeous! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
In between these seasons of color Lie dreams upon which I've fallen In the comprehension of your smile. ================================= Breathtaking is the crimson burn That lights my way back to your embrace; Enchanting are the eyes that have been presented By the unruffled night in moonlit breezes. ============================== Endless is the song that was introduced At the heart of the rain in fields of influence. =============================== SO ... this is what its like to have a muse  (blah blah)Well, its about time ya got yer frostybutt in here and posted something I could do my mothy worship on  Can I just *sigh* for awhile first? *L* cuz let me tell ya...this verse is a major eye sigh... "Breathtaking is the crimson burn That lights my way back to your embrace; Enchanting are the eyes that have been presented By the unruffled night in moonlit breezes. yeppers ...Im loving that one... Im loving all the influences and anticipation Im seeing in this beauty...me thinks its a good cloud day and youre inspired like the sky  Beautiful blending of imagery, analogy and emotion girlie..and ya KNOW I am loving that new sig line...someone has some outstanding taste in tunes heheNow its my turn to say..thanks for the poetic relief. mothyme ... and I don't know why ... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I forgot to put this in me library.. silly mothyme. and I forgot to say..... (M R Ducks) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ pssssst .... (is nothing sacred) hehe |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Hiya SnowPants, my goodness this is sooooooooooo beautiful I couldn't resist but read it twice over and I shall indeed treasure this gem in my library... Nice2read ya PoetFriend... Smiles2u *~coco~* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed this very much...James |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
breathtakingly beautiful, loved the images...well done ~HUGS~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
kris, hi sweets! gosh i've missed you and your beautiful work so much...you need to come in here and post a bit more missy...anyways, this is just lovely!! as always your images are so vivid and inspiring...seems you are doing well and i am so glad. take care of yourself and keep in touch! i must say my dear friend, you have grown leaps and bounds in both life, love, and poetry, and its a wonderful and amazing thing to see.... love ya, aims ~~~~~~~~~ "you can't stop |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Noah: thank you so much...it's good to be missed! glad you liked it! Silver Streak: thanks! Martie: thank you much! J: sigh all ya want, girlie...cuz now it's YER turn for a write...WAKKA WAKKA...no, I guess nothing is sacred...if you ever think it is, think back to the first week of April and the good ol' Trends...yaya...and, I will be forever indebted for the poetic relief...you know that...thanks J!! Coco: thank you so much...that's cool that you liked it enough to read it twice...glad you liked it! James: thanks...glad you enjoyed! tracie: thank you so much...I really appreciate your encouraging reply! Amy: hmmm...ME keep in touch?? hmmmmmm...LOL...ah well, seems life has been crazy as of late, huh?? thanks for stopping by, and it's always good to hear from you... sp    I've been down this road forever, |
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