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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2002-04-26 05:03 PM

I lay my soul upon your heart
weakened by life's timeless thought

When my eyes are closed
I taste the rain sip the sky
of you and I

And feast upon endless stars
a hunger I pray will never die

Your words stirred my emotions
every feeling of me belongs
to you

No other dream can surpass
the ache of need
the want of you
all there is,us
two clouds forming

As the gentle breeze flows
through the soul of an endless
horizon

Like stolen moments
crimes of passion
seeping like tears of tomorrow
like fears of yesterday

Drawing us as one
into the present
only you know my soul,
only you know my heart

Only we can share
this eternal Heaven
our bodies adrift
light as a feather
as we yearn to escape

~Sinking fast into
an ocean of you,
what if I told you,
what if I said
that I love you
do we dare cross
that line between your
heart and mine~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-04-26 05:07 PM

"Drawing us as one
into the present
only you know my soul,
only you know my heart

Only we can share
this eternal Heaven
our bodies adrift
light as a feather
as we yearn to escape"

BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautiuflly breathtaking, I LOVE IT! (BIG HUGGSSSSSS) You two always bring such magic and love to these pages, sweet friends, such a soft yearning fills these powerful words, I LOVE IT!!! (smiles) WE all love you both so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2002-04-26 07:02 PM

I lay my soul upon your heart
weakened by life's timeless thought

When my eyes are closed
I taste the rain sip the sky
of you and I

And feast upon endless stars
a hunger I pray will never die

Your words stirred my emotions
every feeling of me belongs
to you

No other dream can surpass
the ache of need
the want of you
all there is,us
two clouds forming
=============================

I was wondering when you two would write together ... or should I say meld words into eye sighs

This has such lovely phrasing and images ...
wrapped up in a whispered yearning that pulls the reader in.
Please do-duet again.

... and I don't know why ...
Why should love come down and just sweep me away
I want to fly ... but there are so many things in my way.

J Browne

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

3 posted 2002-04-26 07:05 PM

Wht a beautiful, flowing write. You two speak well together.
Sandra

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

4 posted 2002-04-26 07:05 PM

As the gentle breeze flows
through the soul of an endless
horizon

What a beautiful way to express love.

((Lauren))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2002-04-26 07:20 PM

your words blend into a tapestry of beauty. Well done to both of you!!

Like a red brick,
in a white wall
somebodies brush
forgot to paint...
lonely....(as sung by Tracy Lawrence..)

texasrose
Member

since 2001-10-24

Posts 146

6 posted 2002-04-26 08:32 PM

I don't post much but I do often read without commenting. Lauren I love your works as I also do Ctowens and this is well constructed and very beautiful. Lovely duet.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2002-04-26 09:11 PM

You two du-et very well!
Enjoyed sooo much!
~Hugs to you both~

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

8 posted 2002-04-28 11:24 AM

He is indeed a pleasure to work with, I too hope we will do many more duets.....Thanks Craig, for helping present this, as only you can.....

Thanks one and all....for your time....Much love to all....

Lauren~

~Sinking fast into
an ocean of you,
what if I told you,
what if I said
that I love you
do we dare cross
that line between your
heart and mine~

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

9 posted 2002-04-28 01:34 PM

Yes, thank you everyone for taking the time to read and comment on our little piece. Lauren has a gift that tends to overflow onto those who have the pleasure of working with her ... a pleasure I am sure we shall share with you again.

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

10 posted 2002-04-28 01:54 PM

Lauren & Craig,
Such a soft gentle poem. It has indeed touched my heart. Here are to many more...

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

11 posted 2002-04-28 02:37 PM

Craig & Lauren

this is such a beautiful poem!! you
both had me smiling and crying at the
love it speaks of...you two duet very
well...more please!!

take care.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

12 posted 2002-04-28 07:13 PM

Like stolen moments
crimes of passion
seeping like tears of tomorrow
like fears of yesterday

Beautifully written, Lauren...
and I love your new photo also...

~lots of hugggsss~

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

NapalmsConstantlyConfused

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 529

13 posted 2002-04-30 01:02 AM

both of you, this is really beautiful.
way to go.
-Dave

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

14 posted 2002-04-30 01:11 AM

I love it! You guys did wonderfully on this

I hope to see more duets from the two of you, your styles blend beautifully

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (04-30-2002 01:12 AM).]

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

15 posted 2002-04-30 01:12 AM

This was absolutely dreamy!!!
Two passionate hearts at their best!!!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

16 posted 2002-05-01 09:39 AM

GR8 write you guys

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