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ecrivan
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0 posted 2002-04-26 04:48 PM



Evidence from modern heiroglyhic reliefs of walls
whispers echo from under awnings tacked on stalls,
from the brushed sands swept clean from sedementary beds
predacious discoverers confront fossils, old routes are bled.

Young bats in their crannies notice subtle change
swoop from their roosts by the rules of the game;
fished from water surfaces if they fall prematurely
new evidence shines light on our undiscovered fury.

of hunters that tallied their catch of beast and died
of the rocket that sent up secret codes to be spied;
flakes of evidence take passengers to the ground
ticker tape parades spiral with to confound.

Heiroglyphic sketches on graded mesa roof tops
tell me the future repeats the past with a flop;
undiscovered fury points to baked-in clay details
whispers echo from shelterd premises gone retail.

Tainted civilzations came, families conquered
the earth was squeezed and powers squandered
artifacts were seized, bas-reliefs were laundered
seen through Horus eyes of the heiroglyph that wonders.

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (04-26-2002 04:54 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-04-26 07:07 PM


Very interesting, I lke this.
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2 posted 2002-04-26 07:12 PM




(sigh) Wow, this is soooooo very powerfully thought-provoking, sweet friend, it too amazes me how lines and circles can always hold so much hidden meaning and remain so evident to how time and civilization react! (big hugggsssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

ecrivan
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3 posted 2002-04-27 01:35 AM


Noah, Caralinamoon,

much is taken for granted about all those lines and shapes!thanks for sharing


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