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Knight Be Mine
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Knight Be Mine |
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Lady Ollyne Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 337East Coast |
Knight Be Mine Late this eve, with mine hands Shall place the glow of candles bright Invisible of fantasy Upon mine visions, thee will light. Shall taste the curve that deviates The smooth of thee that bends my will To hold in hand, resolved in thought In whispered touch, I love thee, still. Come join me in mine afterrhyme Dance the rhythms, angled so Arch mine words, contort in form The truth will rise in body's know. Knight be mine, beneath moons pull Liberate mine heart in full. Lady Ollyne "O, learn to read what silent love hath writ: To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare [This message has been edited by Lady Ollyne (04-26-2002 01:00 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady Ollyne If I could I would this lovely write is more than good. |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
soft, pretty and nice rhyming!  |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Lady...I curtsey... welcome home... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I like the word afterrhyme. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
thou hast indeed found the loveliest of words to grace us with this noon, Poet Fair. . . words that indeed tell the story of thine heart. . . well done. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
~~beautiful~~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely enticing writing...James |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
My Lady - always... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh my gosh, I love this, sweet friend, your gorgeous words shine with the story of a true chivalrous love! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Lovely stuff, Lady.  How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Into the vision of thine eyes thy Knight rides in sweet surprise With flowers red to match the mood and cheese and bread, lover's food.. Excellently written Lady O.....enjoyed... |
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Lady Ollyne Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 337East Coast |
This Lady does appreciate the reading of her words ~smiling Lady O Lady Rose, Lady In white I thank thee *s Sir Squire ( I like that better) The afterrhyme came to mind as I read the final line. Thank You Sir Lady Ollyne "O, learn to read what silent love hath writ: |
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Lady Ollyne Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 337East Coast |
Sir Sven, Mine words are yours to feast upon and thus maybe enjoy a knightly wander of mine heart. Thanking Thee, Lady O Lady Connie, 'Tis nice to have thine eyes grace mine words. This Lady thanks thee. Sir JamesM, Enticing my Knight is a work of art. ~Smiling Thanks Lady Ollyne Sir Charles, Always a pleasure to view words from thee. Ollyne Sir Noah, A chivalrous love is the only kind in this land of tales and beyond. *s Lady Ollyne Lady J, As lovely as any words that you may grace the blue with. Thanks to thee Lady Ollyne Sir Magnus, " Into the vision of thine eyes thy Knight rides in sweet surprise With flowers red to match the mood and cheese and bread, lover's food.." I wish only for that...thank you Ollyne "O, learn to read what silent love hath writ: |
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