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Soleil Noir
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0 posted 2002-04-26 10:49 AM



Helix

Tendril thoughts
crept up slim ankles

calves currying curl

to tease his view
as he watched

breathe on the intake

green fires emerge
from their delicate shadows

all to catch a glimpse

of what was to be.

© Copyright 2002 Soleil Noir - All Rights Reserved
ecrivan
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1 posted 2002-04-26 10:52 AM


sumptous thoughts and suggestivity put to verse, I'm gasping...


Janet Marie
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2 posted 2002-04-26 11:08 AM


calves currying curl
==========================

Girl....you keep this up and summers gonna come in sooner  *S*

Inhale.....exhale ...

*sigh*  

... and I don't know why ...
Why should love come down and just sweep me away
I want to fly ... but there are so many things in my way.

J Browne

Martie
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3 posted 2002-04-26 11:12 AM


SN

Soft and sensual...lovely read!

Enchantress
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4 posted 2002-04-26 11:15 AM


Oh so sensual....
Seems everyone is intune at Passions lately
~Hugs for this keeper~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2002-04-26 11:38 AM


can visualize this pose
and then the stutter step
the lean and the release

nothing more exciting than
a lady with proper form
at the bowling lanes..

could have sensual overtones to huh?

(big grin...) very fine ms N

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6 posted 2002-04-26 12:00 PM


Very lovely...


Lauren~

~Sinking fast into
an ocean of you,
what if I told you,
what if I said
that I love you
do we dare cross
that line between your
heart and mine~

Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2002-04-26 12:37 PM


mmm...very lovely write...soft and sensual..

Like a red brick,
in a white wall
somebodies brush
forgot to paint...
lonely....(as sung by Tracy Lawrence..)


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8 posted 2002-04-26 02:34 PM


As cool as a green flame.
Magnus
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9 posted 2002-04-26 02:50 PM


Must be something to do with the moon
being close to or full now.....

softly, softly sensual and such a delicacy
to partake of.....

Mag

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10 posted 2002-04-26 02:51 PM


now, I liked the "twists and turns" of this one. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Mistletoe Angel
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11 posted 2002-04-26 08:25 PM




Wow, I love the sensual feel behind these passionate words, these words ignite with such depth and magic! (big hugggssssss) This is absolutely wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Soleil, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-26-2002 08:25 PM).]

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