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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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You dress me with eye thoughts in rememberance of days when sigh songs were sung in shimmer moments spent listening to the quiet of your voice. I bask in the light of your mind gifts. A flicker of flame shines through the Dark warming thought places, leaving a damp need of soothing and sating desires with lover sighs while languishing in your mind touch.... If I once again whispered~ would you remember? Like a red brick, in a white wall somebodies brush forgot to paint... lonely....(as sung by Tracy Lawrence..) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (04-26-2002 09:37 AM).] |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms donna, you dance well your woman here pale of morning on your skin blush of evening in your eyes.. sensual views ms |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You dress me with eye thoughts in rememberance of days when sigh songs were sung in shimmer moments spent listening to the quiet of your voice. ===================================== warming thought places, leaving a damp need of soothing and sating desires with lover sighs while languishing in your mind touch.... If I once again whispered~ would you remember? ============================ WHOA!!!!! My goodness girlie...what a very very cool write this is...and such a lovely moment of inspire... me thinks whom ever this is intended for could not forget.  Donna this is fabulous writing..the phrasing and metaphor, along with the sensual emote and imagery is MOST effective...reminds me of someone Me thinks you have found your niche'...this style suits you very well. waaaay cool  ... and I don't know why ... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ds, the smiles you give are the whispers that are sent your way. Thank you Dark one.. JM, ahhh so you like this style ( I just don't let this side come out that often...my muse sent special thoughts to me this am.)....perhaps I should post more of mine like this some day? Thanks for the way cool response too.  Like a red brick, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit A delicious write, enjoyed. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
YES...let this muse write unrestrained... let this side show...my goodness girlie...something this inspiring shouldnt be kept in the dark |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sey babe, glad you found it a treat...thanks. JM...rotflmao....oh dear help us all if I cut loose on that more often...lmao... Like a red brick, |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
this is a cool write, much enjoyed |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh WOW Donna! Now this is a very different side of you! Enjoyed so much! You should let her out more often... ~Hugs~ |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
 Lovely!! woohooooooo Lauren~ ~Sinking fast into |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
E~ I'm glad that you enjoyed, I do appreciate your time. *s* Nancy, lol...I thought I should tuck "her" away for awhile, but I do let "her" out every now and again. I am so pleased that you enjoyed. Like a red brick, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lauren~Just hinging on some memories of by gone moments that were pretty darn good...*w* It has been awhile since my thought words have come out this way. You know me...*wg*.. that writing tends to turn intense at times......lmao it just sneaks in there unseen it seems... thanks hon. Like a red brick, in a white wall somebodies brush forgot to paint... lonely....(as sung by Tracy Lawrence..) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (04-26-2002 12:35 PM).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
A pop song. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Donna, I like the style of this...and love the message...the thought and the vision that comes from it... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words are always bound to touch his heart and have all the memories you share mirror before you! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A song that hopefully everyone sings there own tunes to. Thanks B. Magnus, glad you enjoyed the thougbts and visions. thanx. Noah, your just a doll. Thanks... Like a red brick, |
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texasrose Member
since 2001-10-24
Posts 146 |
Now this is the D I remember! Good to see you writing like this again. Dont make her hide for so long next time. You goooooooo |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I'm jealous, my friend...that "I" didn't write this wonderful piece! Maybe when I grown up and learn more... jwesley |
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