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Aimster
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0 posted 2002-04-26 08:57 AM


Whispers of My Heart

My heart whispers your sweet name late at night
Your beautiful face enraptures me with divine light
The very warmth of your smile brightens up my day
My soul is entwined with yours, forever it will stay

From the moment I saw you, I knew you were the one for me
Like a key fits a lock, you match my soul completely
Each time we are together my spirit takes flight and flies
Without you though, my heart becomes shattered and I break down and cry

Setting me free from the chains that have held me in my past
Finally you came along, giving me understanding and a true love to last
I'm blessed for everything you give me, for all the love you show
Without you I wouldn't be anything, and it's just time that you know

There are times, when I miss you so much, I feel I could die
Then I think of your sweet face, and once again my spirit does fly
You are the answer to my prayers, my soulmate for all time
I'm speechless beyond words to be able to call you mine

I love you J!

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

© Copyright 2002 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-04-26 09:03 AM


Aimster
One very lucky guy, wonderful write.

Marsha
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2 posted 2002-04-26 11:39 AM


Amy darling lil sis of my heart OH YES!! This is exceptional writing, utterly utterly brilliant. You have truly outdone yourself this time. Every single word in this is utterly perfect, threaded into place like the sparkling jewels that adorn the hair of a Goddess.

Each and every stroke of your pen proclaims love out loud

Wonderful writing absolutely wonderful

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


Sven
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3 posted 2002-04-26 03:21 PM


keep whispering my friend. . . they're the words that are remembered. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Magnus
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4 posted 2002-04-26 06:02 PM


I like this,  and I agree with Sven's
comment about whispering....Keep
whispering....don't stop!

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-04-26 06:37 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I know he will alays be blessed by your love just as I hope he forever makes you feel happy! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

jwesley
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6 posted 2002-04-26 06:40 PM


Ah, it's a wonderful feeling to be enraptured...isn't it?  And think, we could feel that way about just about everything if we'd just let ourselves...but then, when love has captured our souls...we feel that way about most things without even trying...huh?

jwesley

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