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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Satin Edge sometimes when I look too closely life amazes me it’s like seeing lace attached to rock satin too tight to the jagged curled frills next to the edge |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
why did I think of a knife before I read this?? hmmmmmm. . . I like your image far better. . . well done. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  WOW!!! This is a very interesting metaphor, sweet friend, your wonderful words are always such a delight to read! (kiss on cheek) This is smooth and fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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texasrose Member
since 2001-10-24
Posts 146 |
excellent use of metaphors. Spledid. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I felt every word of this cutting and could see those images clearly. Well done. Like a red brick, |
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