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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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waterfalls make their music words mist hovers as vapor birds on wing looking through windows there behind the wooded walls of secret trees you fill my hands with your willing your charms are my knead want places my beard makes thigh brush sounds and tingle flesh erects under skinends we dance as wind branch dancers our fingers are on each other's hands under spell of magic we are mindless insiding, outsiding, togethering as one time is silent there, in our moments cave our breathing is in rhythm with dreams shuddering is our dance foot groove sigh music reverbs our throat whispers we are seduction, vibrato on water... ©Dark |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
you fill my hands with your willing your charms are my knead want places-- i HOPE yanno how incredibly loveley this is... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms serenity, thank you for your whispers and for your eyes |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I can't even pick a favorite line DS, beautiful words from your neverending wealth of sensual..... we dance as wind branch dancers our fingers are on each other's hands under spell of magic we are mindless insiding, outsiding, togethering as one yep, you have a way with words...*sigh* Like a red brick, |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
time is silent there, in our moments cave our breathing is in rhythm with dreams shuddering is our dance foot groove sigh music reverbs our throat whispers we are seduction, vibrato on water... I'd sail this sea till I had no "outer" voice and the ocean dried to cracked bottom dust. For now..will just sing..dayyymmmnn real sweet.. Sincerely, Reg |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
you fill my hands with your willing your charms are my knead want places my beard makes thigh brush sounds and tingle flesh erects under skinends we dance as wind branch dancers our fingers are on each other's hands under spell of magic we are mindless insiding, outsiding, togethering as one ================================== yeah...."a way with words" is a good way to say it...assuming one can do more than sigh.  Ya had me from the title on this one... such lovely analogy and imagery, I also enjoy the way you slip in some internal rhymes in your free verse style. another intense and romantic gem from you poet sir...your muse is constant in its leavings of impress.  you fill my hands with your willing what a line that is. very very cool. ... and I don't know why ... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Gentle one... thank you sweet one for your touch and your thoughts Regina, glad you enjoyed this little view, something I think about when sitting in the truck waiting for her to get a coke out of that old ice water machine there...thanks babe Janet Marie, when I read your re's it is a whole new poem with a lady under it and over it...thank you |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You, sir, are a choreographer of imagery, with your own special brush of magic applied by ghost hands... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! Yet another morning of very warm cheek smiles! Fantastic Dark! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger Your getting to be one of my favourites, enjoyed. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
some pretty evocative stuff here..neat! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Sunshine...good morning ms..thank you for the lean and look in...you bless me Enchantress, you are wonderful with your comments thank you Sy, thanks sir, I appreciate your reviews ecrivan, humble thanks for the review and comments |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Yes...yes, you certainly are. There's so much sensuality in this...wowee. You just make my morning tea complete! *hugs* ~Krista  Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Good morning, DS Lovely with coffee, this sigh! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
smittykitty, tea and the read and thee..mmm sounds wonderful from this side too ms martie, thank you for stepping close with your smile and coffee.. |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
under spell of magic we are mindless insiding, outsiding, togethering as one when edges lose their boundaries when touch becomes electric the meld of thought causes spirits to take wing Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms indigo edges in blender spin on blades of broken teeth with salted saliva we are alive then thanks lady.. |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
I love your sensual fountain. Patience is the ability to idle your motor, when you feel like stripping your gears. Author Unknown |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
phachi, you are a blessing to my words, thank you |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Sehr kuhl. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'our fingers are on each other's hands under spell of magic we are mindless insiding, outsiding, togethering as one time is silent there, in our moments cave our breathing is in rhythm with dreams' This is definitely one of my favorites, DS...brilliant write...the images are beautifully formed... sp    I've been down this road forever, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) This is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always glimmer with such soft and lovely imagery! (big hugggssssss) May your fingers always be intwined with the love of your lifes, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friedn, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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