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Ivory beams
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Ivory beams |
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KimW Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 268Medford, Oregon, USA |
Shadows trail the horizon, faint shades of gray tinged with a touch of blue glow in the aftermath of beaming ivory - shimmering through. Underneath clouded wintry shade, a hilltop sits silent - awaiting rain. Muffled bird calls, scampering deer feet, rustling shade trees, fall motionless - as the grove enfolds itself in the temperate covering of winter. ©KdW, 2001-2002 |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KimW~ This is a beautiful piece of poetic thoughts~ Imagery is vividly portrayed ... Thank you for sharing~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooo breathtaking, sweet friend, your gorgeous words are always such a delight to read! (kiss on cheek) This shines with such seasonal beauty, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kim, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
This is beautiful Kim, and a re-read of it gave me quite calm, and gentle graced the scene... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I like the title here, it sets the scene well for the poem. . . and it's unexpected. . . I like that. . . great work. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
It does more than make me want it be there -- it actually puts me there. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Kim....this is very soft....and easy to feel. enjoyed! |
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KimW Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 268Medford, Oregon, USA |
Marge - Thank you for the warmth and compliment within your reply. Thank you more for reading. Noah - Thank you Lady in white - I'm smiling - your comment is greatly appreciated! Sven - Nice to hear that the title draws the reader in and the poem is unexpected. MUCH appreciated!bsquirrel - THAT means alot to me - Thank you for your kind reply. Magnus - Thanks! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
uhhh, pardon me, by I just sat my easy chair right there, in the middle of it all... what a wonderful place. Uhhh, could you hold the noise down please, I just want to listen... a beauty my friend. jwesley |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Very serene feel...beautifully done! |
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KimW Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 268Medford, Oregon, USA |
jwesley - I won't say a word Se' it right 'ere and take it all in along with me. Martie - Thank you! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Fantastic writing here Kim... I very much enjoyed reading your poem... Smiles2uPoetFriend *~coco~* |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
KimW~ Reminds me of winter in MN, ohhhh I miss that....I just moved to FL this year...  thank you for the memory....Hugsss Lauren~ ~Sinking fast into |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
KimW~ Oh this is beautifully done, loved the imagery...well done, well penned ~HUGS~ Tracie |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
KimW - I believe this is the first poem I've read of yours. I like it very much, the imagery is very vivid and alive, almost like I'm there... BC |
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KimW Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 268Medford, Oregon, USA |
Whoa! I disappear for a day to do mundane daily chores and I come back to find these replies - Thank you!! I think what I enjoy more than the fact that anyone is reading, is getting to see a little of each of you through your replies. |
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