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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-04-25 08:20 PM

The world born from molten flow
of fires that burn from deep within
Billions of years in time that go
flying past on a cosmic wind

A core of golden heat so hot
would melt the strongest modern steel
Born of a time we know not what
for ages past, now sealed, don’t reveal

Surrounded by stars that shed a light
and bask the earth in softest hue
A moon that traverses a still night
if not for Sun, would not subdue

The poet’s pen born from the heat
from within the heart of the core
Born to write on wings flying fleet
in times of old and nevermore

Though time will take away the quill
and poet’s souls will take to wing
rhyme and verse shall remain then till
poetry’s quilled as angels sing.

Inspired by a comment from Martie that poetry will never die.....

And YES Martie...you may call me Barry

[This message has been edited by Magnus (04-25-2002 10:53 PM).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-04-25 08:27 PM

Then I shall call you Mr. Barry
and thank you for this thrill
for I would read a bit to carry
me further on forever's hill...

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

2 posted 2002-04-25 08:54 PM

Magnus darling heart, as always you write with such skill and beauty I really found this excellent poem wonderful. The beauty of your words uplifts a soul and this delightful confection illumes the page and my heart. Well done darling heart, exquisite writing. This poem contains some amazingly beautiful lines, the flow is utterly utterly divine, and I love it I truly do.

Oh how I wish I could write like this, this is seriously good.

Utterly utterly utterly perfect

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

3 posted 2002-04-25 08:58 PM

The poet’s pen born from the heat
from within the heart of the core
Born to write on wings flying fleet
in times of old and nevermore

Glad you were inspired...very cool write, Barry.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2002-04-25 09:30 PM

Magnus~
Ahhhhh, the beauty of it all~

'Though time will take away the quill
and poet’s souls will take to wing
rhyme and verse shall remain then till
poetry’s sung on angel’s wing.'

Really enjoyed your inspired thoughts~
*HUGS*
~Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

5 posted 2002-04-25 11:50 PM

Hello Barry

This was just wonderful. There is always so much wisdom portrayed through your words and I absorb every drop. I'm only sorry I don't get to read all of your wonderful words.

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-04-25 11:57 PM

(smiles) Yes, yes, I too am convinvced that the beauty of poetry can never die for while there will always be many that can suppress what we believe in, the English proverb will always outshine them all that the pen is stronger than the sword, and through ink, justice will always be served and beauty will always be unveiled! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2002-04-26 03:07 PM

indeed Sir, it shall remain as long as words exist, and even then, it shall be in the sounds of eternity. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2002-04-26 03:12 PM

Magnus
A fine write and a fine read.

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

9 posted 2002-04-26 03:28 PM

very well done Sir
~~ Connie ~~

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

10 posted 2002-04-26 03:45 PM

Hi Barry

I thought that sounded familiar...so glad to inspire this lovely poem with my comment!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

11 posted 2002-04-26 03:51 PM

Dang Barry! This is as beautiful as it's inspire by Martie!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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