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Zinsser
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0 posted 2002-04-25 02:24 PM



Emotions Emote


Hearing the music
Drawing you a note
Playing you a word
Emotions Emote

A full scale of touches
Speechless conversation
Fine tuning instrument
Musical sensations

Hearing the music
Eyeing you a note
Dancing you a word
Emotions Emote


Connie McDonald
April 25, 2002
AM

[This message has been edited by Zinsser (04-25-2002 02:25 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-04-25 02:27 PM


Hearing the music
Eyeing you a note
Dancing you a word
Emotions Emote


oh yeah, I reallyyyy like this.  good to see you again.

Like a red brick,
in a white wall
somebodies brush
forgot to paint...
lonely....(as sung by Tracy Lawrence..)


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2 posted 2002-04-26 02:43 AM


Zinsser~

Ooooooooh, I like this~
*hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Zinsser
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3 posted 2002-04-26 09:57 AM


Thanks You both very  much....
Glad you enjoyed..
  ~~ Connie ~~

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4 posted 2002-04-26 03:06 PM


"playing you a word"
"dancing you a word"

I'm wondering how to do this. . . you've made me think. . . and that's a good thing. . .

well done. . .

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Zinsser
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5 posted 2002-04-26 03:24 PM


Sven.... glad you enjoyed
        glad you are thinking  : )
~~ Connie ~~

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6 posted 2002-04-26 03:43 PM


Connie

Music and poetry have much in common.  I enjoyed this!  Is it raining in your part of California?

Zinsser
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7 posted 2002-04-26 04:01 PM


Martie.... to me music , dancing, poetry all very much the same ... can say anything with all three...  : )
  Looks like its going to rain anytime here
  I am so ready for summer
~~ Connie~~

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8 posted 2002-04-26 04:51 PM


it's nice to funnel in info from other artistic fields, neat write


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9 posted 2002-04-26 05:04 PM


Connie, nice words...draws one to think of
the interpretation....like how you have
written this poem..

Zinsser
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10 posted 2002-04-26 06:13 PM


ecrivan; Thank You very much  : )

Magnus; interpretation is a funny thing...
   It depends on what ones mind and eyes have seen... where they have been.. what they are doing....  I love it  : )
Thanks
~~ Connie ~~

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11 posted 2002-04-26 07:36 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always sing like music and sparkle and erupt with true love! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, this made me smile, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Connie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Zinsser
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12 posted 2002-04-27 11:51 AM


Noah; as always Thank You for your kind words.....  : )
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