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Laying It On The Line (or quilling rambles of mind...)
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Laying It On The Line (or quilling rambles of mind...) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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I'm laying it on the line with every written thought revealing to much of my heart sharing the lessons I've been taught. Sometimes reaching inside so deeply not knowing if others can understand when speaking of lasting footprints left embedded eternally in the sand. Writing the joys of my life documenting a trail of tears leaving behind glimpses of my soul telling the tale of passing years. Sometimes exposing to much when quilling these rambles of mind I give it my heart and soul... I'm laying it on the line. on the wings of words our spirits fly...and our souls are free...me {I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~ Garth} [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (04-25-2002 01:23 PM).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I really like this. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Donna darling girl this is utterly utterly wonderful. The flow is superb the line and form utterly perfect. You have written an absolutely diamond here, truly outstanding writing   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentleSpirit~ 'Sometimes exposing to much when quilling these rambles of mind I give it my heart and soul... I'm laying it on the line.' I don't think we can 'expose too much'~ WONDERFUL~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
What choice does a poet have? Well done my friend! We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssss) Oh my gosh, I too wish that I could just expose all I am thinking on paper, though it is hard to process everything at once! (kiss on cheek) This is a wonderful ramble from your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Lay it on the line....this is an expectional ramble.... Lauren~ ~Sinking fast into |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Donna, There is no better place to do that than right here. Lay it on the line...no edit. Well done. It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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