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Silver Streak
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0 posted 2002-04-24 10:47 PM


Religion

When God looked down from heaven and said to man,

"Come! All wannabees, rejoice and sing"

Man edited God's poetry, struck out the rejoice
Added a cross
And told woman to say:

Come! All wannabees, sting!

And religion was born.

Religion.

Copyright: Newell Elsworth Usher
Silver Streak of Silver Springs, Florida
April 24, 2002

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1 posted 2002-04-25 08:58 AM




(sigh) Wow, this is a wonderful perspective on the evolution of religion, sweet friend, your words are always so descriptive and edifying! (big hugggsssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Newell, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-04-25 10:11 AM


Newell darling boy this is Utterly perfect writing, excellent phrasing in this short but delightful piece. I love this.

We all praise him in our own way, and this in itself is a praiseworthy and excellent piece

Excellent darling boy utterly utterly excellent

  
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


Silver Streak
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3 posted 2002-04-25 12:55 PM


Thank you sweet Noah for you loving thoughts.

((Noah))
-newell

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Silver Streak
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4 posted 2002-04-25 12:57 PM


Thank you, Marsha, for you kind words of honey. You always pour sweetness into my soul.

((Marsha))
-newell

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