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Suetang
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0 posted 2002-04-24 06:23 PM




From high above the golden sand dunes
We look down in awe below
The still waters are bathed in amber
The island edged in a golden glow

We hear a seagull's lonely cry
As he flys off into the night
You stand with your arms around me
As we absorb this magnificent sight

The sun has since retired
Laid to rest after a long hot day
The moon will take over proceedings
Spreading moonlight across the bay

A place for friends and lovers
Some stay from night 'til morn
Bearing witness to nature's beauty
As the sun rises with a brand new dawn

Suetang

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-04-24 07:22 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, may that golden glow forever shine over the ocean and radiate with the afterglow of your dreams always! (kiss on cheek) This is tropically majestic, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-04-24 08:54 PM


Sue,  a beautiful poem and a very awesome
view....Enjoyed this...

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3 posted 2002-04-25 01:18 PM


Enjoyed the colors.
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4 posted 2002-04-25 01:29 PM


This is very romantic, Sue.  Love burns bright, doesn't it?
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5 posted 2002-04-25 07:36 PM


Beautiful words and the picture is just magical. How I long to visit your homeland. Please continue to write and show.  Hugs, Marti

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6 posted 2002-04-25 08:37 PM


Even without the picture this would have been a vision seen through your words.  Extremely beautiful Sue.  *s*

Like a red brick,
in a white wall
somebodies brush
forgot to paint...
lonely....(as sung by Tracy Lawrence..)


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7 posted 2002-04-25 09:02 PM


One of my favorites to date. This is truly beautiful...I could see the sun. ThisDiamond
Suetang
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8 posted 2002-04-26 12:05 PM


Thank you all for your lovely comments.  I'm so glad you enjoyed this beautiful sunset with me.

Take care....Sue

Suetang

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