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Zinsser
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0 posted 2002-04-24 05:28 PM



If...
If I could read
The words that
Pound in your chest

Would my name
Be there
As it once
Was

Connie McDonald
April18, 2002

© Copyright 2002 Connie McDonald - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-04-24 05:53 PM


I like this one Connie *s

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2 posted 2002-04-24 07:48 PM




(sigh) This is soooooo powerfully heartfelt, sweet friend, may sweet memories of friendship forever beat from this special persons heart and may you always be remembered by this friend! (sigh) I think we can all ask ourselves these questions sometimes, sweet friend, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Connie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-04-24 08:44 PM


Connie...this is a very powerfully presented
question...I doubt that I shall forget these
words soon...  Very well said..

Zinsser
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4 posted 2002-04-24 09:48 PM


Maureen, Noah and Magnus.....
Thanks for your comments...
I kept trying to make this a longer poem..
but it took away from these words.. so I left it alone  LOL
~~ Connie ~~

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